Waiting is all I have

well waiting is never easy but when you do not have a choice.. you have to wait for it..

Waiting is something too easy to say

quite callous to understand

Those feelings that I know you had for me

are dead

You crushed my heart like a cigarette

You said you loved me

You said you cared

But now I realized you are just a faker

So now I am left alone in your past

You left me down on a road of hatred

I am still waiting for you on my knees

I know you did not even care

I wish one day you will realize 

how easy it is to say no

When you are screwed from all sides

you only wish to be aside

Waiting is all I have

but remember you are in my thoughts

Author's Note

please give honest reviews as you always do...just rate it too
if you hate it say it..
if you love it..i can judge it

Reviews

[Erica Daubert]

i really liked the "crushed like a cigarette" line. definitely original. i've read a lot of "crushed hearts" lines but that was a first for me. I dig this. I've been there, man. Some people get off more just by f*****g with someones head than actually loving them. It's a type of abuse that most don't recognize because most only associate abuse with violence. That's not always the case. My best advice to you is to leave this person in the past. If they don't want you now... they probably never will. A harsh reality... but you deserve someone that instantly wants you forever, that love at first sight s**t. i hope you find someone that can make you happy. this person just sounds like they're making you cry. good luck in the future. i'll check out some more of your work.

[Akshat♥]

I will try...Thank you...means a lot to me :)

[DarkAspen]

I love it because it reminds me of a relationship I once had.

[Radad Ibn Nasir]

This is the truest form of suffering. One that bleeds but blood is not seen,. That tears but no seams are split. That crys with tears unwept. Patience is knowing that it will all unfold in due time and this write is full of sentences that hold you long enough to let you go somewhere else. I really like how understanding you are ... even though you dont have to be. A magical quality if ive ever known any magic at all.

[Calypso]

Wonderful. I love and emotions and slow of the poem. "crushed like a cigarette" just added life and flavor to this poem!

[Black]

isn't it realise? instead of realize?
further a mind fullfilling poem
that makes you think

[Jack Isaac]

Yes indeed, all the world is a stage, and we are merely players. Yet as the picture shows, wait if you may for the players to come alive, but don't wait so long as to let the building crumble down around you. Seek out the living and the real --and the miracles! Nice poem in expression!

[Groovy]

Excellent penning!!

[Katseye]

Very good write. You can feel the despaire, and desparation.

Sorry it took so long for me to read.

[Loner]

Shows strong emotions from the start till the end which gives a
flavor of its own to the poem of your great write...

[priyanka kalra]

its good...but not your best ....

[stars are far]

This was so great piece ..
i truly liked it
this line :"You crushed my heart like a cigarette"
is amazing ..well done :)