Waiting is all I have

well waiting is never easy but when you do not have a choice.. you have to wait for it..

Waiting is something too easy to say

quite callous to understand

Those feelings that I know you had for me

are dead

You crushed my heart like a cigarette

You said you loved me

You said you cared

But now I realized you are just a faker

So now I am left alone in your past

You left me down on a road of hatred

I am still waiting for you on my knees

I know you did not even care

I wish one day you will realize 

how easy it is to say no

When you are screwed from all sides

you only wish to be aside

Waiting is all I have

but remember you are in my thoughts

Author's Note

please give honest reviews as you always do...just rate it too
if you hate it say it..
if you love it..i can judge it

Reviews

[Erica Daubert]

i really liked the "crushed like a cigarette" line. definitely original. i've read a lot of "crushed hearts" lines but that was a first for me. I dig this. I've been there, man. Some people get off more just by f*****g with someones head than actually loving them. It's a type of abuse that most don't recognize because most only associate abuse with violence. That's not always the case. My best advice to you is to leave this person in the past. If they don't want you now... they probably never will. A harsh reality... but you deserve someone that instantly wants you forever, that love at first sight s**t. i hope you find someone that can make you happy. this person just sounds like they're making you cry. good luck in the future. i'll check out some more of your work.

[Akshat♥]

I will try...Thank you...means a lot to me :)

[Anuvart]

Waiting is too tough :(
i felt it everyday..

[Hitman]

Waiting is too tough :(
i can relate to this...

[Sanjana.N.D]

i love it!!! nice poem!!! the comparistion in this line is really nice You crushed my heart like a cigarette....nice write :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Sanjana.N.D]

ur welcome!!

[Nupur]

hmm... difficult or kind of impossible to leave every thing behind yes life moves on but heart won't.........

[Akshat♥]

True!!

[Amber "Victoriomantic" ..]

Very powerful imagery, especially "You crushed my heart like a cigarette". Also, "When you are screwed from all sides / you only wish to be aside" is very aptly put. When our hearts get broken, we either want to cry out, hide, or both. Pressures can bear down on us and it's often difficult to know what to do for the best. I'm sorry if you've gone through a bad time with your heart, but at least you got some lovely poetry out of it.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Amber "Victoriomantic" Hart]

Welcome!

[Suditi]

A heart touching poem.
Waiting is hard. Very hard. And the sad part is, we can never be sure if the other person will come back or not.
A beautifully written poem.

[Huggy Bear]

Great piece:)

[amdc101]

I love how personal and raw this is. It is thoughtful, but you aren't trying to hard to make it perfect. Way to put yourself out there. Good luck finding someone worthy of you

[rae52]

Waiting is something too easy to say
quite callous to understand

so true

[Ripple of Aqua]

So very sad. This is filled with deep thought and feeling. I loved it when you spoke about being left behind in their past, it gave me a sense of desperation and reaching out to that one person that left me behind. This was amazing.