Waiting is all I have

well waiting is never easy but when you do not have a choice.. you have to wait for it..

Waiting is something too easy to say

quite callous to understand

Those feelings that I know you had for me

are dead

You crushed my heart like a cigarette

You said you loved me

You said you cared

But now I realized you are just a faker

So now I am left alone in your past

You left me down on a road of hatred

I am still waiting for you on my knees

I know you did not even care

I wish one day you will realize 

how easy it is to say no

When you are screwed from all sides

you only wish to be aside

Waiting is all I have

but remember you are in my thoughts

Author's Note

please give honest reviews as you always do...just rate it too
if you hate it say it..
if you love it..i can judge it

Reviews

[Erica Daubert]

i really liked the "crushed like a cigarette" line. definitely original. i've read a lot of "crushed hearts" lines but that was a first for me. I dig this. I've been there, man. Some people get off more just by f*****g with someones head than actually loving them. It's a type of abuse that most don't recognize because most only associate abuse with violence. That's not always the case. My best advice to you is to leave this person in the past. If they don't want you now... they probably never will. A harsh reality... but you deserve someone that instantly wants you forever, that love at first sight s**t. i hope you find someone that can make you happy. this person just sounds like they're making you cry. good luck in the future. i'll check out some more of your work.

[Akshat♥]

I will try...Thank you...means a lot to me :)

[Mary E. Green]

I like it. Great wording & great job on getting the point across.

[pratishtha]

wow. wow wow.... so much of love.

[Richard Williams]

Well said with a good cigarette simile.

[Brook Hughes]

Wow!.... great poem:) I absolutely love the last 2 lines. very descriptive and filled with emotion. Keep writing:)

[Daniel88Batson]

Would make a better lyric than poem personally. But very good.

[topsyturvy]

Though it was simple, it was pretty deep and raw. Filled with such emotion, I too have been there. "Waiting is something too easy to say
quite callous to understand" Too true!

[BlindedMinded]

Whoaa I loved it. I think we have all felt that way at some point or another.
Great peice overall..the simile about crushing like a ciggerate..its really origional and imagetic

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Really lovely writing... I like whole wording... Keep it up.. God bless you!

[fernii]

I kind of like it, but i understand what you are trying to get accross and i do like it :)

[Fragilebrokendreams]

I really do believe this just sums up of how I was a fool in the past and now this poem just spoke the words Im afraid to say sometimes. I really do like this.