I am something that you never expected

I am something that you never expected

A Poem by Akshat♥
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Some people you never expected to be like this.. they always do the things we never expected this poem is for those people who do unexpected things in life:)

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Never expect never assume
Never expect the expected
Never expect anything from anybody
Never expect the things that hurt you in return


Sometimes we search for the things that hurt us at last
Sometimes we feel unwanted
Sometimes we help others so much and
expect something in return
Sometimes we hate ourselves and love others so much


These expectation always hurt us at last
These feelings of loneliness tear us apart
These bad thoughts create a pressure in us
These unwanted things just make us debile

I am something that you never expected
I always feel different 
different from others
All the world drops dead when I shut my eyes,
and all is born again when I lift my lids.

I always had a fear from you don't know why
and still I love you 
I always feel like flying with birds
and still I am on earth

you will never understand me,
If you don't understand my silence

You will never understand me,
I guess no one ever will

When I walk,everybody just stops
I do the unexpected thing
so I also just stop

© 2013 Akshat♥


Author's Note

Akshat♥
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I always had a fear from you don't know why
and still I love you
I always fell like flying with birds
and still I am on earth

Probably the most powerful stanza in this poem, the comparison along with the imagery that it provides sends a clear message. But sometimes its really hard to expect the unexpected. I was told to expect the worst but hope for the best, but unfortunately that blew right up in my face for the unexpected happened, and it was far worse than what i had expected...far far worse. So as much as we would like to expect the unexpected yet not assume, its doesn't usually happen because the heart wants what the heart wants, regardless of it all...

The size of the font threw me off a bit and didn't really sit well with the tone of the poem. Other than that, honest words.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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The are many aspects to what we are. What you speak of in your poem is certainly one. What sometimes strikes some of us is that, those who grow more capable are put to greater tests to show the way to others. ' He who knows and knows he knows,' is an old adept that points to the object of achievement.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Expect nothing and be pleasantly surprised!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

So true, no expectations means no disappointments.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The feeling within this poem is priceless. You pour out the words like water, freshly written for the reader to convene in one's thoughts. Contradicting one thing to another and I find it amazing how you have a flow to each sentence with the main words. Amazing power and feeling into this. Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This has a few elements that entice the reader to stop and think. Actually the body of this piece is a ocean filled with such features that do more than thrill. They delight and provoke deep thought.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful words, beautiful sentiments. A nice piece of work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it, it is full of emotion, saddness and hope, its really well written and i love the way it speaks to me. Its so beautiful and i love the message that it sends to me

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love it, its beautiful. I love the message.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Interesting. It'll take more than one reading to really appreciate fully. It's very deep. Good work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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