I am something that you never expected

Some people you never expected to be like this.. they always do the things we never expected this poem is for those people who do unexpected things in life:)

Never expect never assume
Never expect the expected

Never expect anything from anybody

Never expect the things that hurt you in return

Sometimes we search for the things that hurt us at last

Sometimes we feel unwanted

Sometimes we help others so much and

expect something in return

Sometimes we hate ourselves and love others so much

These expectation always hurt us at last

These feelings of loneliness tear us apart

These bad thoughts create a pressure in us

These unwanted things just make us debile

I am something that you never expected

I always feel different 

different from others

All the world drops dead when I shut my eyes,

and all is born again when I lift my lids.

I always had a fear from you don't know why

and still I love you 

I always feel like flying with birds

and still I am on earth

you will never understand me,

If you don't understand my silence

You will never understand me,

I guess no one ever will

When I walk,everybody just stops

I do the unexpected thing

so I also just stop

Author's Note

Please give honest reviews ...I really appreciate your views:)
and your valuable time of reading it...

Reviews

[J.V. Stanley]

I always had a fear from you don't know why
and still I love you
I always fell like flying with birds
and still I am on earth

Probably the most powerful stanza in this poem, the comparison along with the imagery that it provides sends a clear message. But sometimes its really hard to expect the unexpected. I was told to expect the worst but hope for the best, but unfortunately that blew right up in my face for the unexpected happened, and it was far worse than what i had expected...far far worse. So as much as we would like to expect the unexpected yet not assume, its doesn't usually happen because the heart wants what the heart wants, regardless of it all...

The size of the font threw me off a bit and didn't really sit well with the tone of the poem. Other than that, honest words.

[Revenge<3'sMe]

I'm left speechless after reading because the words were powerful and deep. A true meaning is dancing in between the words and in the background.

[OtherWorldWoman]

This was different, and I really liked it. The image at the top gave me some hope, as well. So, I thank you for that. Anyway, well done. I like your ideas and how you meshed them together.

[Mehul Rwat]

Cool . I feel like saying it in Hindi - "Mast hai yaar!"

[msharma]

I feel the unfathomed truth is peeping through the words framed.Well structured thoughts and the idea revolving it .Really wonderful.

[rwar ish me]

ver nice and well written

[ShameemAkhtar]

Good poem, very well written.

Could do with a few touches here and there.

But change the title, that's my recommendation... It puts off..

[Amila Jay]

This is a lovely poem:)

[srija singh]

hey nice work........ and nice thought too but i really think that life is better if u have some one in it who expects something frm u and of whom u can expect too. u kno life and all the things that u do become just so much more thrilling nd exciting

[YouoweYoupay]

I do not like the title very much, it could be better including keywords like the ones above: silence, butterfly, eyelids...etc. HOWEVER I am literally in tears because of how wonderful the simplicity in your poem flows, touching each and every string in my heart...I promise I can relate to every single stanza, You have spoken my mind and you have written down what I have been trying to say for so long. I am very lucky to have stumbled upon your page. Thank you very much for the wonderful light you gave me. I will make sure it spreads...100/100

[anindita]

The lines are beautiful. Very well written.