I am something that you never expected

Some people you never expected to be like this.. they always do the things we never expected this poem is for those people who do unexpected things in life:)

Never expect never assume
Never expect the expected

Never expect anything from anybody

Never expect the things that hurt you in return

Sometimes we search for the things that hurt us at last

Sometimes we feel unwanted

Sometimes we help others so much and

expect something in return

Sometimes we hate ourselves and love others so much

These expectation always hurt us at last

These feelings of loneliness tear us apart

These bad thoughts create a pressure in us

These unwanted things just make us debile

I am something that you never expected

I always feel different 

different from others

All the world drops dead when I shut my eyes,

and all is born again when I lift my lids.

I always had a fear from you don't know why

and still I love you 

I always feel like flying with birds

and still I am on earth

you will never understand me,

If you don't understand my silence

You will never understand me,

I guess no one ever will

When I walk,everybody just stops

I do the unexpected thing

so I also just stop

Author's Note

Please give honest reviews ...I really appreciate your views:)
and your valuable time of reading it...

Reviews

[J.V. Stanley]

I always had a fear from you don't know why
and still I love you
I always fell like flying with birds
and still I am on earth

Probably the most powerful stanza in this poem, the comparison along with the imagery that it provides sends a clear message. But sometimes its really hard to expect the unexpected. I was told to expect the worst but hope for the best, but unfortunately that blew right up in my face for the unexpected happened, and it was far worse than what i had expected...far far worse. So as much as we would like to expect the unexpected yet not assume, its doesn't usually happen because the heart wants what the heart wants, regardless of it all...

The size of the font threw me off a bit and didn't really sit well with the tone of the poem. Other than that, honest words.

[light and ashes]

I love this so much! Every line is so relatable for me! This also has alot of truth for the human population, people shock you because you expect them to be a certain way when people are so much more complicated then that! This is an awesome write.

[∂αʌ<..]

brilliant writing!

[Alicia Hirshey]

Wonderfully written.

[Raindrop]

Sometimes we search for the things that hurt us at last
Sometimes we feel unwanted
Sometimes we help others so much and
expect something in return
Sometimes we hate ourselves and love others so much

Speechless. The way I understood this is the 'others', that we love more than ourselves, don't understand 'us' because we hate ourselves. I loved every bit of it. Nicely done. It was a pleasure reading it.

[Hatchling]

I love it!! Nicely done

[Michael of Gilead]

Too many expected's, too many sometimes.

[Sunflower 20]

that was some great writing! i really liked the flow and the fact that you took the time to think about its presentation. very well done! i think it talks about never allowing others to change you, and even though they have their expectations of you, its doesn't always mean they're right.

this is my favourite line:
All the world drops dead when i shut my eyes,

and all is born again when i lift my lids.


great stuff! :)

[Aly Jones]

I like this. It shows the power of one person, and the problems of a group.

[StarSandwich]

- Sorry been away for awhile :/

Nishal. Tbh, I disagree the title matches up to the poem just fine and it is full of 'Heart full of sad stuff' to have people not expect much of you is a real downer but yet your still finding it to fight on inside for love.... I wounder if I'm even on the right track.

Liked it though :D

[nishalization]

The title is so thrilling to read but sorry to say bro but did not match up to the expectation.
The idea was good but when I first read the title of the poem,it gave me a thought that it was a heart full of sad stuffs but contrastingly it wasn't.i'm sorry but wat I felt I said.best of luck brother..