I am something that you never expected

Some people you never expected to be like this.. they always do the things we never expected this poem is for those people who do unexpected things in life:)

Never expect never assume
Never expect the expected

Never expect anything from anybody

Never expect the things that hurt you in return

Sometimes we search for the things that hurt us at last

Sometimes we feel unwanted

Sometimes we help others so much and

expect something in return

Sometimes we hate ourselves and love others so much

These expectation always hurt us at last

These feelings of loneliness tear us apart

These bad thoughts create a pressure in us

These unwanted things just make us debile

I am something that you never expected

I always feel different 

different from others

All the world drops dead when I shut my eyes,

and all is born again when I lift my lids.

I always had a fear from you don't know why

and still I love you 

I always feel like flying with birds

and still I am on earth

you will never understand me,

If you don't understand my silence

You will never understand me,

I guess no one ever will

When I walk,everybody just stops

I do the unexpected thing

so I also just stop

Author's Note

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and your valuable time of reading it...

Reviews

[J.V. Stanley]

I always had a fear from you don't know why
and still I love you
I always fell like flying with birds
and still I am on earth

Probably the most powerful stanza in this poem, the comparison along with the imagery that it provides sends a clear message. But sometimes its really hard to expect the unexpected. I was told to expect the worst but hope for the best, but unfortunately that blew right up in my face for the unexpected happened, and it was far worse than what i had expected...far far worse. So as much as we would like to expect the unexpected yet not assume, its doesn't usually happen because the heart wants what the heart wants, regardless of it all...

The size of the font threw me off a bit and didn't really sit well with the tone of the poem. Other than that, honest words.

[T.W. Early]

This was an astounding piece. I have not read something like this before. Very unique and creative. great job!

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gah! so true the last line for alot of people i hate it when people expect you to be there why can't we suffer? :P great poem

[Lane-roe]

"You will never understand me, if you don't understand my silence" - love these lines! Very insightful and inspiring - well done :)

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Cool..!!!

Nice job...!!!

[LiberScriptus]

Another great poem! I love your candor and simplicity- your style is very honest and frank, and I like that you don't try and overdress it with big words or anything. I also think the visual presentation, with the colors and pictures, is very interesting. I think the words are very nice, but perhaps you could make it more interesting by playing even more with the visual presentation of the poetry- by perhaps altering capitalization or punctuations to create emphasis in certain areas.

I am something that you never expected
I always feel different
different from others
All the world drops dead when I shut my eyes,
and all is born again when I lift my lids.

I love this stanza, and I think everyone can relate to it. I think if you added dashes and played around a bit with the line breaks, it could be even more powerful.

[Fragilebrokendreams]

I think its a really beautiful poem and it really confronts this certain fear and uncertainty in a way that is upfront yet gentle in a way.

[Loner]

Awesome feelings, great emotional punches, and smooth flow...
i loved it!

[Amrita Sharma Pokharel]

Really love this poem very much,constructive poem from beginning to end...and the way you put upon your view of positive and negative side of expectation was really superb..

[Kat Collins]

I learned long ago to not have expectations and just be. Experience life as it is, not as I think it should be. Excellent topic and thoughts of the poem.

The flow of the lines were a bit rough and unsteady. Don't be afraid to be more creative in your words and expressions! Go for the unusual - especially since it's a poem about not doing the expected.

[Taji Herbert]

All the world drops dead when I shut my eyes,
and all is born again when I lift my lids

My favorite 2 lines.

I know this feeling the whys and how comes of life.