I am something that you never expected

I am something that you never expected

A Poem by Akshat♥
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Some people you never expected to be like this.. they always do the things we never expected this poem is for those people who do unexpected things in life:)

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Never expect never assume
Never expect the expected
Never expect anything from anybody
Never expect the things that hurt you in return


Sometimes we search for the things that hurt us at last
Sometimes we feel unwanted
Sometimes we help others so much and
expect something in return
Sometimes we hate ourselves and love others so much


These expectation always hurt us at last
These feelings of loneliness tear us apart
These bad thoughts create a pressure in us
These unwanted things just make us debile

I am something that you never expected
I always feel different 
different from others
All the world drops dead when I shut my eyes,
and all is born again when I lift my lids.

I always had a fear from you don't know why
and still I love you 
I always feel like flying with birds
and still I am on earth

you will never understand me,
If you don't understand my silence

You will never understand me,
I guess no one ever will

When I walk,everybody just stops
I do the unexpected thing
so I also just stop

© 2013 Akshat♥


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Akshat♥
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I always had a fear from you don't know why
and still I love you
I always fell like flying with birds
and still I am on earth

Probably the most powerful stanza in this poem, the comparison along with the imagery that it provides sends a clear message. But sometimes its really hard to expect the unexpected. I was told to expect the worst but hope for the best, but unfortunately that blew right up in my face for the unexpected happened, and it was far worse than what i had expected...far far worse. So as much as we would like to expect the unexpected yet not assume, its doesn't usually happen because the heart wants what the heart wants, regardless of it all...

The size of the font threw me off a bit and didn't really sit well with the tone of the poem. Other than that, honest words.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Really well done. This poem felt vulnerable to me and that is very refreshing

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

its a really good poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

There is a lot of truth in this. It is very thought provoking. Very enjoyable.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Loved that proverb and loved your poem. WHOO! So many words and so much truth and totally happy for reading this. I mean i just loved the line when you wrote All the world drops dead when I shut my eyes and all is born again when i life my lids." Just made me smile and you're right do not expect things from others I mean theirs people I've stopped expecting things from long ago and to expect tht none expected is just nonsense now a days as nothing is predictable. I also love the ending with the stopping and all. Truly excellent job and keep up the excellent you can do.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Enjoyed reading your work..It is true no one but God understands us..Some will think that they understand us and have us all figured out but they really don't know us..The reason is most people can not let the truth come from within because other people will use that truth to hurt or destroy..Sunflower

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very heartfelt. I love the line: "All the world drops dead when I shut my eyes, and all is born again when I lift my lids." Good poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the message, clear and strong. The rhyme well....or it was a free verse. I like the picture, it hooks the reader's attention also the bold text colour, sometimes it aint about the poem but the way its presented.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow!! the poem is just superb thnks for sharing

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Surprises make life fun and entertaining. I like people who are alive and you don't know what their next movement may be. I like the strong opening and wisdom in the poem. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very creative, and I love it.. very unique..xx

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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