I am something that you never expected

Some people you never expected to be like this.. they always do the things we never expected this poem is for those people who do unexpected things in life:)

Never expect never assume
Never expect the expected

Never expect anything from anybody

Never expect the things that hurt you in return

Sometimes we search for the things that hurt us at last

Sometimes we feel unwanted

Sometimes we help others so much and

expect something in return

Sometimes we hate ourselves and love others so much

These expectation always hurt us at last

These feelings of loneliness tear us apart

These bad thoughts create a pressure in us

These unwanted things just make us debile

I am something that you never expected

I always feel different 

different from others

All the world drops dead when I shut my eyes,

and all is born again when I lift my lids.

I always had a fear from you don't know why

and still I love you 

I always feel like flying with birds

and still I am on earth

you will never understand me,

If you don't understand my silence

You will never understand me,

I guess no one ever will

When I walk,everybody just stops

I do the unexpected thing

so I also just stop

Author's Note

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and your valuable time of reading it...

Reviews

[J.V. Stanley]

I always had a fear from you don't know why
and still I love you
I always fell like flying with birds
and still I am on earth

Probably the most powerful stanza in this poem, the comparison along with the imagery that it provides sends a clear message. But sometimes its really hard to expect the unexpected. I was told to expect the worst but hope for the best, but unfortunately that blew right up in my face for the unexpected happened, and it was far worse than what i had expected...far far worse. So as much as we would like to expect the unexpected yet not assume, its doesn't usually happen because the heart wants what the heart wants, regardless of it all...

The size of the font threw me off a bit and didn't really sit well with the tone of the poem. Other than that, honest words.

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Beautiful writing.... I like whole wording.... Keep it up... God bless you!

[priyanka kalra]

its great...genuine feelings...i loved it ...:)

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I really like this, its a different sort of perspective about things.
I think maybe you meant to put 'feel' instead of "fell" in this line:
"I always fell like flying with birds"

[Rhea]

very nice poem,,,, loved it... genuine truths...

[jhumur]

in all these years..i have understood something really valuable..n that is "be yourself"!! keep writing.. :):)

[Yari Garcia (Older Prof..]

I think more than a poem, this is a piece of advice.

[Vinod Kumar U K]

Nice example, cute write....

[kij143]

Though you most certainly can use repetition (in a slight excessive manor thereof) is it nessecary to add meaning to the poem ? Be careful to not sound redundant when utilizing that use of language ! the poem was really thought provoking, I had to go back and re-read it a few times to try and clearly understand what I perceived to be the message of it. Thanks for sharing ! (:

[Uc Amalu Jr]

Great!

[Brook Hughes]

We all stand out in our ways. Great poem, good flow, and honest words:) keep writing