I am something that you never expected

Some people you never expected to be like this.. they always do the things we never expected this poem is for those people who do unexpected things in life:)

Never expect never assume
Never expect the expected

Never expect anything from anybody

Never expect the things that hurt you in return

Sometimes we search for the things that hurt us at last

Sometimes we feel unwanted

Sometimes we help others so much and

expect something in return

Sometimes we hate ourselves and love others so much

These expectation always hurt us at last

These feelings of loneliness tear us apart

These bad thoughts create a pressure in us

These unwanted things just make us debile

I am something that you never expected

I always feel different 

different from others

All the world drops dead when I shut my eyes,

and all is born again when I lift my lids.

I always had a fear from you don't know why

and still I love you 

I always feel like flying with birds

and still I am on earth

you will never understand me,

If you don't understand my silence

You will never understand me,

I guess no one ever will

When I walk,everybody just stops

I do the unexpected thing

so I also just stop

Author's Note

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Reviews

[J.V. Stanley]

I always had a fear from you don't know why
and still I love you
I always fell like flying with birds
and still I am on earth

Probably the most powerful stanza in this poem, the comparison along with the imagery that it provides sends a clear message. But sometimes its really hard to expect the unexpected. I was told to expect the worst but hope for the best, but unfortunately that blew right up in my face for the unexpected happened, and it was far worse than what i had expected...far far worse. So as much as we would like to expect the unexpected yet not assume, its doesn't usually happen because the heart wants what the heart wants, regardless of it all...

The size of the font threw me off a bit and didn't really sit well with the tone of the poem. Other than that, honest words.

[Nupur]

Never expect anything from anybody
Never expect the things that hurt you in return
true when we dont get expected it hurts, but not possible to control expectations.
anyways nice expressions.....

[Akshat♥]

I can understand your feelings :)

[Amber "Victoriomantic" ..]

Wise words, very well written. I especially like the phrase
"All the world drops dead when I shut my eyes,
and all is born again when I lift my lids."

That's very true. All people are unique and deserve to be treated as so. We also can't predict our own actions, never mind those of others!

[Akshat♥]

Rightly Said...Thnx for the review :)

[Sarah Jane]

So powerful and truly unsuspecting:) Great write

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Sleeping Maiden]

I truely love the unexpected thoughts here. Powerful and very meaningful to your readers. You give us strength from this poem of yours. There's a lot of lines that hit my heart because i can relate so well to it.. such as:

"Sometimes we search for the things that hurt us at last

Sometimes we feel unwanted

Sometimes we help others so much and

expect something in return

Sometimes we hate ourselves and love others so much"

"you will never understand me,

If you don't understand my silence




You will never understand me,

I guess no one ever will"

These last two - touches me in more ways than one...

[Huggy Bear]

Great piece:)

[realmwriter]

I know what I expected and stil I expect it even though for now I know its probably over. My heart wont let it be. I guess I will do the unexpected and show how hard I fell. I may not understand much but I understand this piece. Thank you for the read request, I enjoyed this very much.

[☯]

I really enjoyed the truth tied and shouting from this. I liked the "unexpected" thoughts that were written. Though, I was a little bit confused, I totally understood it. You always have to go with your own beat, and never expect. Amazing job :)

[Megan]

so many memorable lines in this poem that just bring a smile to my face...I love the concept, how we tend to project our feelings on other people and expect things from them in return for what we do to them. great finish to the poem, "when I walk, everybody just stops I do the unexpected thing so I also stop"

[Aarontastic]

Honestly, I do not care much for this poem--the main problem that I have with it is its repetitiveness. This most evident in the first three stanzas, which made reading them kind of a bore for me, especially in the first one, which seemed to preach a bit too overtly. Obviously, you were repetitive in those stanzas on purpose, but I just feel like it was a bad call.

Also, I don't think 'expections' is a word, not sure if that's a typo or not.

From the 4th stanza on, things were better. In fact, that stanza was my favorite; it restated the name of the poem, which I loved :) It's just a very engaging name.

At the 5th stanza, you abruptly appeared to change subject and started addressing some mystery person about seemingly unconnected stuff...that hurts the unity of your poem imo. The ending was enigmatic, but sort of cool.

Your poems are always really life-affirming and cheerful to me, and that is part of what makes them enjoyable, but this one could use some touching up I think.

[Chirinos20]

wow, I really like this piece! ~~~you will never understand me,
If you don't understand my silence~~~silence it's telling, everyone use it different. To show anger, bothersome or sadness. But it's difficult to understand it from someone that you don't know....The unexpected always happens but no matter how hard you try to be prepared. There is always something that will leave you dumb founded!