I am something that you never expected

I am something that you never expected

A Poem by Akshat♥
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Some people you never expected to be like this.. they always do the things we never expected this poem is for those people who do unexpected things in life:)

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Never expect never assume
Never expect the expected
Never expect anything from anybody
Never expect the things that hurt you in return


Sometimes we search for the things that hurt us at last
Sometimes we feel unwanted
Sometimes we help others so much and
expect something in return
Sometimes we hate ourselves and love others so much


These expectation always hurt us at last
These feelings of loneliness tear us apart
These bad thoughts create a pressure in us
These unwanted things just make us debile

I am something that you never expected
I always feel different 
different from others
All the world drops dead when I shut my eyes,
and all is born again when I lift my lids.

I always had a fear from you don't know why
and still I love you 
I always feel like flying with birds
and still I am on earth

you will never understand me,
If you don't understand my silence

You will never understand me,
I guess no one ever will

When I walk,everybody just stops
I do the unexpected thing
so I also just stop

© 2013 Akshat♥


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Akshat♥
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I always had a fear from you don't know why
and still I love you
I always fell like flying with birds
and still I am on earth

Probably the most powerful stanza in this poem, the comparison along with the imagery that it provides sends a clear message. But sometimes its really hard to expect the unexpected. I was told to expect the worst but hope for the best, but unfortunately that blew right up in my face for the unexpected happened, and it was far worse than what i had expected...far far worse. So as much as we would like to expect the unexpected yet not assume, its doesn't usually happen because the heart wants what the heart wants, regardless of it all...

The size of the font threw me off a bit and didn't really sit well with the tone of the poem. Other than that, honest words.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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i like this i can so relate to what you feel here !!:) like always this was a wonderful poem !:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

really unexpected... you made me stop.. n read your poem twice.. good job sir...
inshahallah.. bohat khoob....

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Deep and meaningful. Well done x

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"All the world drops dead when I shut my eyes,
and all is born again when I lift my lids."

Those are my favourite lines. Great work. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

weird
nut weird in a good way

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

nice ...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a powerful poem and I lobe how the picture at the top goes with the poem. Great job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You've outdid yourself with this one. Its neat. Its descriptive. And the end syncs perfectly with the tone. Great job buddy. love it :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The least expected seems to be what usually happens. This was a beautiful piece of poetry. You did very well, grabbed us into the explaination as to exepecting what to expect, and breaking from that said confine. I like that you shouted out the wrongness in judgement of ones self and that, "all right, let us see what you think about this reaction" statements at the closing were right on the mark. Well, done work. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this was a very nice poem here, love it a lot! firstly i really like the picture you've put at the top, really suits everything. the poem itself was good and very powerful, and intriguing indeed. great!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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