I am something that you never expected

Some people you never expected to be like this.. they always do the things we never expected this poem is for those people who do unexpected things in life:)

Never expect never assume
Never expect the expected

Never expect anything from anybody

Never expect the things that hurt you in return

Sometimes we search for the things that hurt us at last

Sometimes we feel unwanted

Sometimes we help others so much and

expect something in return

Sometimes we hate ourselves and love others so much

These expectation always hurt us at last

These feelings of loneliness tear us apart

These bad thoughts create a pressure in us

These unwanted things just make us debile

I am something that you never expected

I always feel different 

different from others

All the world drops dead when I shut my eyes,

and all is born again when I lift my lids.

I always had a fear from you don't know why

and still I love you 

I always feel like flying with birds

and still I am on earth

you will never understand me,

If you don't understand my silence

You will never understand me,

I guess no one ever will

When I walk,everybody just stops

I do the unexpected thing

so I also just stop

Author's Note

Please give honest reviews ...I really appreciate your views:)
and your valuable time of reading it...

Reviews

[J.V. Stanley]

I always had a fear from you don't know why
and still I love you
I always fell like flying with birds
and still I am on earth

Probably the most powerful stanza in this poem, the comparison along with the imagery that it provides sends a clear message. But sometimes its really hard to expect the unexpected. I was told to expect the worst but hope for the best, but unfortunately that blew right up in my face for the unexpected happened, and it was far worse than what i had expected...far far worse. So as much as we would like to expect the unexpected yet not assume, its doesn't usually happen because the heart wants what the heart wants, regardless of it all...

The size of the font threw me off a bit and didn't really sit well with the tone of the poem. Other than that, honest words.

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Love this. The words flowed, and I enjoyed reading it.

[Akshat♥]

Me too;) thank you:)

[chanchal]

quite close to heart and the feel when things seems far away coming closer to us.
nice poem.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

Curses.. I wrote a really long detailed comment and WC ate it.. I will just say that this is very well done with some great images and flow. The last stanza though gave me trouble.. if everyone stops, wouldn't the expected be to stop too.. so the unexpected would be to just keep moving on. Expectations create pain, disappointment and sometimes loss. Better to live without expectations so there is no suffering.

[Akshat♥]

yeah,i agree with you :)
Thank you dear :)

[Akshat♥]

u wrote a long comment on WC means??

[Ravyne Hawke]

I wrote a long comment here for you and Writers Cafe stalled out on me.. the whole comment was lost

[Akshat♥]

oh...please try to message me again about all that...I don't know about that :P

[Ravyne Hawke]

The main point is in my remarks about the last stanza.. the rest was just about lines I enjoyed.. really though, it was nothing major.. but it just irked me that WC took it all away.

[Akshat♥]

Ok ok..no problem...Thank you :)

[beautiful life]

I got really impressed by the picture..
Sweet poem :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Fox]

All the world drops dead when I shut my eyes,
and all is born again when I lift my lids.

Loved those lines :). About the rest - priceless, but still can't understand, how "poems" are made in English. In Russian there are tonns of rules, like tempo, rhymes, step and other things. So, for me it's quite different to understand by now. But still, liked it, was awesome to read :D.

[Akshat♥]

Well,I also don't no from when i am writing and why i am writing..
I am just writing for you and for me :D
Thank you For your honest review
Your friend
Akshat

[Dakshta]

Amazing write.. and the best part.....this one rhyme :)

[Akshat♥]

Again you described very less...no prob.
Yeah,,Thank you :)

[Dakshta]

I really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really liked your write...I hope that's a long description :)

[Akshat♥]

i mean write something abt the piece...wht u like abt it..wht u dislike abt it..
wht improvement u think can be applied...wht kind of feelings u got from this piece..etc etc :)

[Akshat♥]

if u still can't understand what i mean to say..check J.V. Stanley comment :)

[Dakshta]

no no no no that is so unfair...here I am reviewing your writings while you haven't reviewed even one of mine :(

[Akshat♥]

Happy now ?? :D

[Dakshta]

nope. That was only one X-(

[Akshat♥]

check again dear :P

[Dakshta]

hmmm well still I commented on more :p

[Akshat♥]

lol...kill me :P

[Dakshta]

If I don't get more reviews from you then belive me I will :)

[Akshat♥]

Depends on my mood... :P

[Dakshta]

what do u mean by mood?

[Akshat♥]

good or bad...

[Dakshta]

.....

[Akshat♥]

,.,.,.,.

[Dakshta]

?

[Akshat♥]

? ;)

[Dakshta]

;)

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

nice and wise...great write :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Anuvart]

Touched my heart :)

[Hitman]

i really liked it:)

[sudeshna]

All the world drops dead when I shut my eyes,
and all is born again when I lift my lids.

love these lines... i really liked the beginning..