Nobody to blame

I don't know what came to my mind at that time..I just wrote it see if you like it:)

         










                     Here we go
                    There we stay
                    Its not the  emotions
                    that we blame


                   Feelings of suffocation 
                   that we contain


                   We always like the others way
                   killing ourselves from inside
                   now who is to blame



                                 We confuse ourselves 
                   but in reality everything is simple

                   Sometimes we move fast
                   Sometimes we stay
                   Its just the decisions that we make

                   Life gives us so much
                   We just never consent to it

                    We always want more
                     more than others

                     We never realize it
               Somebody else doesn't even get this

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Christina May Shanaberg]

I have had a poetic vision, unwritten for years, and you wrote it. My vision was of two men walking on a road and coming to a point where they had to choose one of three roads; one through a forest, one over a mountain, and the other along a beach. The first man chose the easy way, the beach. The other chose the mountain. The first man finished the journey, before the day was done, and sat for three days waiting for the other. When the other arrived with cuts and bruises covering him he smiled at the other man, whom wondered why he'd been so foolish. The mountain man smiled and said, "For the last three days, I lived, while you sat waiting for life to come be you on a beach!" Great write!!

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

Symbolic pictured you have here and a great meaningful write indeed. I enjoyed this, thought thinking on how people look among each other.

[Marie Harrison]

Cool photos and poem.
Very meaningful.

[realmwriter]

Sadly we condem everyone before we look at ourselves. We stand on our soapbox ranting about everyone elses failings without so much as a glimps into the mirriror to look at our own failings. We stand on our box and point the finger and condemn. All the while we are just as wrong. One should always look at themselves before pointing the finger at others because there are three more pointing back at you...!

[WritersSoul]

This is an amazing peace, and i always say how poems relate, and its true. Loads of poems can relate, and your is one of them!
They reach out and hook your heart and the story of yours just flows through you head as you read each line. Just thinking 'yeah i've been through that' or 'Thats me the WHOLE way through!'
This is an amazing piece of writing, I relate and its a capturing write :) awesome
100/100

Nice, strong. Has a great message and inspires.

[Enigma]

A wise poem. The images fit well with the theme of the poem and it has been written in a simple and yet, effective manner. Well written.

[alegria]

emotional..nice write:))

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Read Emotional stuff after ages..!!! Good one..!!!

[Hatchling]

nicely written.