Nobody to blame

I don't know what came to my mind at that time..I just wrote it see if you like it:)

         










                     Here we go
                    There we stay
                    Its not the  emotions
                    that we blame


                   Feelings of suffocation 
                   that we contain


                   We always like the others way
                   killing ourselves from inside
                   now who is to blame



                                 We confuse ourselves 
                   but in reality everything is simple

                   Sometimes we move fast
                   Sometimes we stay
                   Its just the decisions that we make

                   Life gives us so much
                   We just never consent to it

                    We always want more
                     more than others

                     We never realize it
               Somebody else doesn't even get this

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Christina May Shanaberg]

I have had a poetic vision, unwritten for years, and you wrote it. My vision was of two men walking on a road and coming to a point where they had to choose one of three roads; one through a forest, one over a mountain, and the other along a beach. The first man chose the easy way, the beach. The other chose the mountain. The first man finished the journey, before the day was done, and sat for three days waiting for the other. When the other arrived with cuts and bruises covering him he smiled at the other man, whom wondered why he'd been so foolish. The mountain man smiled and said, "For the last three days, I lived, while you sat waiting for life to come be you on a beach!" Great write!!

[Tanveer]

wow!!!! this is so amazing write :)

[Brandon]

im not going to bullshit you, i loved this, but the thing is i dont know why. but when reading it i connected to it and loved it. it might not be the case with other people but this was something i enjoyed reading

[Adam Lain]

I liked the beginning a lot. The middle seemed uncertain, but the ending tied it up.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Not bad, we might have a young Maynard James Keenan in training here.

[Sarah W. French]

You wrote this very well. It flowed and spoke the truth. I would like to hear more words along the line of this poem.

[Jennifer Ellen]

I love this.
The way it flows is pretty cool.

[ForTheWorld]

everything you wrote is true, and everything here is hard to accept in the reality....cause honestly there is always this word wrote as d-e-n-i-a-l

[Dearantlers]

Wow, it's so full of emotions! Beautiful poem and great write! Thanks for sharing, and for the read request! This is a really good poem, an dyou are a very gifted writer!

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Great write, I really loved the emotions and powerfulness of this piece. But the third stanza did not make sense to me at all, and threw me off from reading this. It may need some tweaking. Otherwise, great write!