Nobody to blame

I don't know what came to my mind at that time..I just wrote it see if you like it:)

         










                     Here we go
                    There we stay
                    Its not the  emotions
                    that we blame


                   Feelings of suffocation 
                   that we contain


                   We always like the others way
                   killing ourselves from inside
                   now who is to blame



                                 We confuse ourselves 
                   but in reality everything is simple

                   Sometimes we move fast
                   Sometimes we stay
                   Its just the decisions that we make

                   Life gives us so much
                   We just never consent to it

                    We always want more
                     more than others

                     We never realize it
               Somebody else doesn't even get this

Author's Note

honest reviews please...
rate it too...

Reviews

[Christina May Shanaberg]

I have had a poetic vision, unwritten for years, and you wrote it. My vision was of two men walking on a road and coming to a point where they had to choose one of three roads; one through a forest, one over a mountain, and the other along a beach. The first man chose the easy way, the beach. The other chose the mountain. The first man finished the journey, before the day was done, and sat for three days waiting for the other. When the other arrived with cuts and bruises covering him he smiled at the other man, whom wondered why he'd been so foolish. The mountain man smiled and said, "For the last three days, I lived, while you sat waiting for life to come be you on a beach!" Great write!!

[Ankita Mathure]

good one........liked it

[M Garcia]

great job

[Akshat♥]

Amery Dawn @ here i want to say we always like what others do
we never believe in ourselves...we always think he/she is better than me..
and blame ourselves for it..so there is no point in blaming others as well as ourselves...we have to be strong and accept our weaknesses and try to correct them:)

[Que]

I really liked this. It has a very honest and to the point feel to it - I especially liked the first stanza:
"Here we go
There we stay
Its not the emotions
That we blame" - it gives very strong emotions.
One part that I didn't understand was:
"We always like others way
killing ourselves from inside
now whom to blame" - could you maybe explain it please? Thanks :)
Well anyway, cheers and have a good day.

[stars are far]

this was so nice and i think you captured a real problem in this life which is people are not satisfied with what they have ..
great work ..well done :)

[aviiar:))]

dat´s so nice..honestly!:))
i can relate in some ways..
great job!

_aviiar_