Nobody to blame

I don't know what came to my mind at that time..I just wrote it see if you like it:)

         










                     Here we go
                    There we stay
                    Its not the  emotions
                    that we blame


                   Feelings of suffocation 
                   that we contain


                   We always like the others way
                   killing ourselves from inside
                   now who is to blame



                                 We confuse ourselves 
                   but in reality everything is simple

                   Sometimes we move fast
                   Sometimes we stay
                   Its just the decisions that we make

                   Life gives us so much
                   We just never consent to it

                    We always want more
                     more than others

                     We never realize it
               Somebody else doesn't even get this

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Christina May Shanaberg]

I have had a poetic vision, unwritten for years, and you wrote it. My vision was of two men walking on a road and coming to a point where they had to choose one of three roads; one through a forest, one over a mountain, and the other along a beach. The first man chose the easy way, the beach. The other chose the mountain. The first man finished the journey, before the day was done, and sat for three days waiting for the other. When the other arrived with cuts and bruises covering him he smiled at the other man, whom wondered why he'd been so foolish. The mountain man smiled and said, "For the last three days, I lived, while you sat waiting for life to come be you on a beach!" Great write!!

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Awesome write here, enjoyed this

[HeIsWe]

I really like this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Beth Winter]

The images are brilliant partners for this verse. We live in a victim society. Sadly, some people are very adept at being victims, turning it into an art form and defining themselves as such. Thought provoking.

[LinBin]

TRUE WORDS, WELL SPOKEN X

[srija singh]

its actually a very positive way of looking at life... we actually spend half our lives complaining of wat we don hav... never for a moment do we appreciate what a wonderful gift life really is... life's not a race, its a beautiful journey nd we need to slow down nd look around to appreciate its marvel...nice poem.

[Sleeping Maiden]

Wow, a very deep poem! I love it! The meaning here is all true. Sometimes we do takes things for granted and we don't even notice. XD Really great poem, it makes me think. =D

[Sakib]

A thought provoking poem. I liked it. Great write. :)

[Demi Rose]

abstract but well penned.

[∂αʌ<..]

great thinking ...sometimes, we just takes everything for granted and self-possession becomes an obsession!

great poem!

[Cascara (aka Sprint Goe..]

Meaning in this poem is so true...