Nobody to blame

I don't know what came to my mind at that time..I just wrote it see if you like it:)

         










                     Here we go
                    There we stay
                    Its not the  emotions
                    that we blame


                   Feelings of suffocation 
                   that we contain


                   We always like the others way
                   killing ourselves from inside
                   now who is to blame



                                 We confuse ourselves 
                   but in reality everything is simple

                   Sometimes we move fast
                   Sometimes we stay
                   Its just the decisions that we make

                   Life gives us so much
                   We just never consent to it

                    We always want more
                     more than others

                     We never realize it
               Somebody else doesn't even get this

Author's Note

honest reviews please...
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Reviews

[Christina May Shanaberg]

I have had a poetic vision, unwritten for years, and you wrote it. My vision was of two men walking on a road and coming to a point where they had to choose one of three roads; one through a forest, one over a mountain, and the other along a beach. The first man chose the easy way, the beach. The other chose the mountain. The first man finished the journey, before the day was done, and sat for three days waiting for the other. When the other arrived with cuts and bruises covering him he smiled at the other man, whom wondered why he'd been so foolish. The mountain man smiled and said, "For the last three days, I lived, while you sat waiting for life to come be you on a beach!" Great write!!

[Lily Mae]

I enjoyed this and find the message to be quite honest and very true,.., excellent write..xx

[Katseye]

Interesting, deep, nice flow, very powerful imagery.

[Black]

a picture that leaves quiet alot to m imagination,
beautifully worded

[Raven Starhawk]

A specialized view on the boundaries developed by humanity and its luxuries. Life moves at a impossible pace. Humans might never catch up to it.

[LiberScriptus]

Great poem! I love how bold and straightforward it is. And the message is too true- most people would prefer to always pass on the blame, unfortunately. I think it's great how you use an unadorned but honest tone in order to convey your message, and the images you chose to accompany it are very interesting! I think it’s great that you use a kind of stream-of-consciousness methodology in conveying your feelings, and I think it could be even better with a little tweaking here and there, perhaps, just to make it sound more polished.

[Dayran]

From Gibran - ' God rests in reason and moves in passion.' In Zen, they say decisions are like hiccups arising in a person. I think what they both say is that the living person is to some extent the witness.

[Sunni Davis]

I really enjoyed this.Your words are so bold and honest. Its amazing how some people prefer to always blame others, how its easier to say, "I only did it because of what he made me feel." In reality, we are in control of how we react to the things others say and do.

[Alicia Hirshey]

Never point Your finger because there are always three more pointing back.

Brilliant.

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

Oh yeah this is something everyone should know: you may have something that others may not. good write buddy :)

[Calypiso]

love it, sounds like a song, really good song

ever heard the song Secret by the perices? its the theam song for pretty little liars, anyway, i read it to that toon