Nobody to blame

I don't know what came to my mind at that time..I just wrote it see if you like it:)

         










                     Here we go
                    There we stay
                    Its not the  emotions
                    that we blame


                   Feelings of suffocation 
                   that we contain


                   We always like the others way
                   killing ourselves from inside
                   now who is to blame



                                 We confuse ourselves 
                   but in reality everything is simple

                   Sometimes we move fast
                   Sometimes we stay
                   Its just the decisions that we make

                   Life gives us so much
                   We just never consent to it

                    We always want more
                     more than others

                     We never realize it
               Somebody else doesn't even get this

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Christina May Shanaberg]

I have had a poetic vision, unwritten for years, and you wrote it. My vision was of two men walking on a road and coming to a point where they had to choose one of three roads; one through a forest, one over a mountain, and the other along a beach. The first man chose the easy way, the beach. The other chose the mountain. The first man finished the journey, before the day was done, and sat for three days waiting for the other. When the other arrived with cuts and bruises covering him he smiled at the other man, whom wondered why he'd been so foolish. The mountain man smiled and said, "For the last three days, I lived, while you sat waiting for life to come be you on a beach!" Great write!!

[cartera]

'It wisna me' is the national motto of Scotland.
Usually this is followed by: ' A Big Boy did it and ran away.'
...........
Poem expressed this well.
ATB
Alex.

[rwar ish me]

this is very deep.
And full of emotions.
Its a very nice write!
~Amai

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

Really lovely writing.
I like whole poem.
Keep it up!
Lucky!

[Gilbert Saint]

There is a story that was fully baked but the poem representing it, was half done. I think this poem can be better worded, deepened, blame started from the time of Adam and Eve, its not such a simple issue. Other than that, I liked the pictures and the first and third stanza.

[Daniel88Batson]

I like this. Well done!
Just make the font smaller =p

[EMF]

In a blameless society you have stressed the point of taking it, and done so perfectly with style and grace. A wonderful write and read

[Christine]

I like this! It's a sweet poem and the message is really true.
Good job :]

[unknown]

This hit the nail on the head. I think this is so true. " everything is simple" but we make it confusing. Great poem!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Sweet lyrical type poem.
The message makes a great song.

[Dahlia Phoenix]

The message is clear. Nobody wants to take the blame because it hurts too much and they always want to exceed expectations even though its not necessary. The value of blame is to learn from that mistake and from there, decisions are easy to make. Its always been simple. Amazing, direct poem for readers to enjoy.