Going too far

Sometimes we feel so stressed and in so much complications.. that we think to go somewhere silent and feel fresh:)

I am going too far away

Away from reality

Away from expectations

Away from tensions

I want to fly

Flying higher that anyone has ever flown before

Clearing my mind,

thoughts,emotions...

and reach the top of the sky

No crowded place

No polluted air

just me and only me there

No more questions to ask

No more answers to say

I am going too far away

No one can ever reach me

I wake up with a full sun

and sleep with a full moon

I want to know how far I can go

These days seem like a dream

just think what might have been

But now I am going very far away

Author's Note

I have written this to show that we can feel free whenever we want to...
review and rate it...i will really appreciate it:):)

Reviews

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Freedom of imagination. Freedom to escaping reality. That's what makes a poem interesting. The extent of the imagination.

"I wake up with a full sun
and sleep with a full moon"

This speaks well for it. We can make it to places that others can't see or see it impossible. We all can make that possible. Great poem you have written.

[Jaweena...Eileen Quinta..]

The mind has the capacity to travel with no limitations...what an amazing capability! Beautiful journey!

[unknown]

Being in a solitude is good to find peace just have time to yourself. Very good poem.

[J Todd Underhill]

Liked this one as well, but going away does not always solve the problems, it is better to face them head on and take them down like a lion does on a bleeding Hyena!

[CT]

Maybe it's just the fact that reading so many poems in a row can get kind of redundant, but this piece, while certainly pretty good, doesn't do anything that hasn't been done before. It forges no emotional connection with the reader. Not bad, but there is much room for improvement.

[Chris]

This one "feels" right. Well said.

Take care,
Chris

[Coyote Poetry]

Your words are true. We need to find a escape sometime. Life can be a bear. A poem with a real story for the most of us. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

I could almost feel myself flying out of my mind reading this. Everyone needs a break sometimes, and this shows it well. love it! :)