Going too far

Sometimes we feel so stressed and in so much complications.. that we think to go somewhere silent and feel fresh:)

I am going too far away

Away from reality

Away from expectations

Away from tensions

I want to fly

Flying higher that anyone has ever flown before

Clearing my mind,

thoughts,emotions...

and reach the top of the sky

No crowded place

No polluted air

just me and only me there

No more questions to ask

No more answers to say

I am going too far away

No one can ever reach me

I wake up with a full sun

and sleep with a full moon

I want to know how far I can go

These days seem like a dream

just think what might have been

But now I am going very far away

Author's Note

I have written this to show that we can feel free whenever we want to...
review and rate it...i will really appreciate it:):)

Reviews

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Freedom of imagination. Freedom to escaping reality. That's what makes a poem interesting. The extent of the imagination.

"I wake up with a full sun
and sleep with a full moon"

This speaks well for it. We can make it to places that others can't see or see it impossible. We all can make that possible. Great poem you have written.

[rajnish]

chha gaye vidu.....

[Amila Jay]

meaningful words, great write:)

[Brook Hughes]

Well written and very descritptive. when im in class i always daydream and think of there kind of thoughts:) keep writing:)

[Beautifully Tragic xPoe..]

Perfection. This seems to go with my mood recently. Nicely done.

[EMF]

An excellent poem, tight and thoughtful. Well structured and flowling with restraint and emotion. A wonderful discription of how to seperate yourself from your life and pain. I am so glad I came back to it. Wonderful work

[Gilbert Saint]

I think the poem lacked build. Apart from the first stanza, there is little to show why your going away. The reader has to visualize and synchronize with the poem, this is achieved, by building the poem.
Stating why your going away, why so far and not the next street or hood?, will you ever be back?
I think that's all I have to say.

[Larry Dyson]

hmm too far away quantifys and qualifys the length and distance and then you ask the same question..I want to know how far I can go...?..it is a good idea but confusing. and kinda ..maybe incomplete?...keeep working on it please?

[Sleepless]

i felt like this a week agao i wanted to be free go somewhere else get out and i got my wsh when i went to orlndo :) i really like this poem !:)

[dora]

Writing enables us to go that far,
love the poem-it's real, and most of all an awesome read.

[Brandon]

just me and only me be here

just thinking should it be, "me and only me here" instead of what you have? I liked the poem kind of feel like there is a meaning behind it thats kind of dark i may be wrong. But it was nicely written good job!