Going too far

Sometimes we feel so stressed and in so much complications.. that we think to go somewhere silent and feel fresh:)

I am going too far away

Away from reality

Away from expectations

Away from tensions

I want to fly

Flying higher that anyone has ever flown before

Clearing my mind,

thoughts,emotions...

and reach the top of the sky

No crowded place

No polluted air

just me and only me there

No more questions to ask

No more answers to say

I am going too far away

No one can ever reach me

I wake up with a full sun

and sleep with a full moon

I want to know how far I can go

These days seem like a dream

just think what might have been

But now I am going very far away

Author's Note

I have written this to show that we can feel free whenever we want to...
review and rate it...i will really appreciate it:):)

Reviews

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Freedom of imagination. Freedom to escaping reality. That's what makes a poem interesting. The extent of the imagination.

"I wake up with a full sun
and sleep with a full moon"

This speaks well for it. We can make it to places that others can't see or see it impossible. We all can make that possible. Great poem you have written.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked this write. I could relate to it. Sometimes I need to be off on my own. I need to get away. I liked the message you sent out with this poem. You did a really nice job on it. Thanks for sharing.

[MandaBear]

this was amazing work!

[alegria]

was awesome...really gud wrk..keep writin..:))

[Erinne S.]

There is such freedom expressed in this poem, made me feel light (if that even makes sense lol) Anyway, I loved the expression and imaginative imagery in this poem. So beautiful!

~Erinne

[Daytonight]

I love the freedom you give in this poem. Well done. Keep on penning.

[anindita]

Very nicely written. Loved the lines.

[Abd-afeez]

hmmmph! The breath of freedom. Definately what i felt when i followed your piece attentively. This is an amazing work, thanks for sharing.

[Dearantlers]

This is a beautiful poem and great write! And so true, we can feel free whenever we want to. Thanks for sharing!

[Kaylor Mason]

This piece embodies the mind-set of every writer--indeed every human being--in the world. I remember when I wanted to know how far I could go; once, long ago, I went there--then I went one step farther. (It's quite a journey). I was lucky to make it back again, safe.
And I will say: Not many things can beat sleeping under a full moon! :))