Going too far

Sometimes we feel so stressed and in so much complications.. that we think to go somewhere silent and feel fresh:)

I am going too far away

Away from reality

Away from expectations

Away from tensions

I want to fly

Flying higher that anyone has ever flown before

Clearing my mind,

thoughts,emotions...

and reach the top of the sky

No crowded place

No polluted air

just me and only me there

No more questions to ask

No more answers to say

I am going too far away

No one can ever reach me

I wake up with a full sun

and sleep with a full moon

I want to know how far I can go

These days seem like a dream

just think what might have been

But now I am going very far away

Author's Note

I have written this to show that we can feel free whenever we want to...
review and rate it...i will really appreciate it:):)

Reviews

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Freedom of imagination. Freedom to escaping reality. That's what makes a poem interesting. The extent of the imagination.

"I wake up with a full sun
and sleep with a full moon"

This speaks well for it. We can make it to places that others can't see or see it impossible. We all can make that possible. Great poem you have written.

[Hitman]

Exact feeling:)
Nicely written..

[sudeshna]

i want to know how far i can go...
i can really relate to each and every line... great work buddy

[-GB-]

Your poetry is more like thoughts to yourself..i have thoughts to share you just need a bit improvement in expression.

hope it helped.

[Akshat♥]

nope!! I didn't get you here...

[Amber "Victoriomantic" ..]

I hope you enjoy your sense of freedom! We need to cast the chains off sometimes.

[Akshat♥]

Yes I enjoy it ...sometimes though
mostly pressure around me :(

[Amber "Victoriomantic" Hart]

At least you know what you are aiming for :)

[Akshat♥]

No i don't...only trying
lets see where it ends

[Amber "Victoriomantic" Hart]

Well I hope it ends the way you'd want it to :)

[Akshat♥]

Thnx :D

[Bridgette's Ink]

This poem has the essence of a balloon. I know it sounds like nonsense, but the light, free, airy-feel expressed in the poem seems spot on. Of course, readers can relate to that yearning to be free. Great poem, Akshat.

[Sahar moonlight]

You know this feeling, this is the feeling that everyone wish to feel. especially me.
You've expressed it awesomely

[Droll Prole]

I like this poem a lot, escapism best described.

[The XYZ Writer]

Freedom to escape this world, into someplace our own. What a beautiful basis for this poem! For me I'm always imagining things, making up stories, or just plain daydreaming about the weirdest things. We all need to get away at some point. A really true poem! :)

[Anita]

My goodness. This is me 24/7 =) I always daydream this scenario. I liked this poem a lot. I can relate to this

[GawjusGirl]

Hey this is amazing can i borrow this? :)