Search Yourself

Sometimes in life you have to search what is inside you.. Making you Believe..being Strong,feel Good..

I see things in a different way

but  I have got my head on my shoulders pretty good..

The core of man's spirit comes from new experiences,

 new experiences are gained when you risk it.

you have got to get back out in the world to search yourself..

where you stand,if you believe in yourself..

To do that you should make a radical change in your lifestyle.

We can get joy in doing anything that we experience ..

People just need to change the way they look at those things

Those things can be anything from nature to love..

When you lie for something and you know you are wrong

and promise not to do it again and 

that makes you strong from the inside

When you know you have the potential  and you are hiding it..

bringing it out makes you feel good from inside

When you help someone,
you are getting your soul back

this brings out the real you 

When  you  forgive,you love

And when you love,

God's light shines upon you.

If you believe in yourself,

everything you see or feel becomes 

beautiful!

Author's Note

I know it has no flow...that's why it is different..
review and rate it ..tell me your views..be Honest:)

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

WOW. I love this! Definately inspiring and motivating. =D and i've been searching for myself for some time. And this poem makes me look back at it. ^o^ Thank you so much for writing this.

I love the lines! I love this the most,
"When you know you have the potential and you are hiding it..
bringing it out makes you feel good from inside"

=D It is so true!

[Kenneth The Poet]

Very positive piece of writing.

[Linda]

Beautiful colouring, so gooood xxx

[Raspberry Rebel]

Loved the layout to this and the use of colours...
It's often the lack of belief in ourselves that prevent us from reaching our true potential...Very well done.

[?]

Flow or not, who cares. This is wonderful. Great advice that we should all take to heart.
When you help someone,
you are getting your soul back
this brings real you


When you forgive,you love
And when you love,
Gods light shines on you.

Awesome piece, needed to hear this. Thanks so much for sharing this with me and others.

[Yina]

I love this!!! I have like issues with believing in myself:/ lol I believe in others just not myself. Thanks for the beautiful write an heads up:):)

[Raven Starhawk]

I love the choices of color. They accent the words perfectly and give them a great flavor.

[StarSandwich]

I like what you've done the key words stand out. When its says Gods and only 'Ods' is colored that means odds right? Good write. :)

[R E Tree]

I read the three first stanzas. It felt like I was reading a self-help book but thats not a bad thing. I do listen to advice and I appreciate that people care. You sound very knowledgable when you talk about experiance. The writing says a lot of who you are. It feels like your searching for answers like everyone else. At least your not alone

[realmwriter]

Your flow is flawless, your grammar, as does mine, needs work! Your poem is wonderfull. Don't change a thing! Let the images come to the mind of the reader as they will! For me it was of loveing life, I was flying in the clouds as these words carried me aloft, Wonderfull!