Search Yourself

Sometimes in life you have to search what is inside you.. Making you Believe..being Strong,feel Good..

I see things in a different way

but  I have got my head on my shoulders pretty good..

The core of man's spirit comes from new experiences,

 new experiences are gained when you risk it.

you have got to get back out in the world to search yourself..

where you stand,if you believe in yourself..

To do that you should make a radical change in your lifestyle.

We can get joy in doing anything that we experience ..

People just need to change the way they look at those things

Those things can be anything from nature to love..

When you lie for something and you know you are wrong

and promise not to do it again and 

that makes you strong from the inside

When you know you have the potential  and you are hiding it..

bringing it out makes you feel good from inside

When you help someone,
you are getting your soul back

this brings out the real you 

When  you  forgive,you love

And when you love,

God's light shines upon you.

If you believe in yourself,

everything you see or feel becomes 

beautiful!

Author's Note

I know it has no flow...that's why it is different..
review and rate it ..tell me your views..be Honest:)

Reviews

[Sleeping Maiden]

WOW. I love this! Definately inspiring and motivating. =D and i've been searching for myself for some time. And this poem makes me look back at it. ^o^ Thank you so much for writing this.

I love the lines! I love this the most,
"When you know you have the potential and you are hiding it..
bringing it out makes you feel good from inside"

=D It is so true!

[Ravyne Hawke]

I love this searching theme. I think if more people spent time getting to themselves, there would be less crime, wars and murders in the world. Some grammatical errors:

you got to get back out in the world to search yourself.. (you have or you've)

you believe in yourself.. (if you believe in yourself)

We can get joy in doing anything that we experience from.. (leave off the "from," it is not necessary)

and not doing it again.. (and promise not to do it again)

that makes you strong from inside (and that makes you strong from the inside)

this brings real you (this brings out the real you)

Gods light shines on you. (God's light shines upon you)

everything you see or feel become (everything you see or feel becomes)

Really nice poem with a great message. I enjoyed this one.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear...means a lot to me :)
thank you for telling mistakes :)

[Vria P Crow]

PERSONAL CONNECTIONS

1. I am looking for my soul.
2. I am looking for the child.
3. I am looking for the adolescent.
4. I am looking for the adult.

This one made me feel a c t i v e in reality rather than the v i r t u a l world of WritersCafe.

Thank you, Akshat

[Akshat♥]

I am glad that you got activated from this poem...
Thank you for your efforts :)

[Vria P Crow]

You are welcome:D Honesty is my way. It is a child's way as well.

[Akshat♥]

I love children by the way ;)
I like honesty too :)

[Vria P Crow]

haha I do too. I went for Secondary Education.
hehe

[Akshat♥]

nice..wait ..next time i am also going with you to secondary education :D

[Vria P Crow]

:D

[beautiful life]

These are kind of thoughts...
i can totally relate to this :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Akshat♥]

Please describe what u feel about this piece..thank you :)

[Dakshta]

an inspiring write i must say :)

[Akshat♥]

I will love it if u have described it more..
anyways Thank you :)

[Dakshta]

Described? Hmm well it dosen't flow much but is unique, colourful like all your writings, words used here are nice but dosen't click in the mind fast and as I said before an inspiring write :)

[Akshat♥]

i understand your point of you here..i never write poems in a flow..i write what comes to my mind..i write deep..so everyone has to use there brain to understand it...thank you for re-reviewing it :)

[Dakshta]

no problemo :)

[Saumya]

this is outstanding!!!
although does not have a flow of words but it has a wonderful flow of emotions..!!
which makes it exceptionally good!!!
well done..!! hats offf!!
keep wrriting and rocking!!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Saumya]

you are highly welcomed!!

[Akshat♥]

sure! ;)

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

i like the last stanza...deep thoughts..well done :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Anuvart]

Every line has great meaning attached to it..
awesome write:)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Hitman]

superb write :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Tavionna]

Wow, you are amazing! This has truly opened my eyes to my own self. thanks!

[Akshat♥]

thank you :)

[Tavionna]

your welcome

[Akshat♥]

:)