Smell

Smell

A Poem by Akshat♥
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Smell is so important..

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Have you ever wondered when you "smell the roses" in the spring time?
I guess yes you all do..

Smell is something that is too small to see with eyeball alone..

Our sense of smell is connected really well to our memory

like,the smell of popcorn can remind you of being at the movies
with a friend or the smell of rain reminds you of your partner..

The abilty of humans to perceive odors helps us to enjoy life

Our sense of smell also gives us warning,alerting us from danger signals
such as a gas leak,spoiled food,or a fire.
any loss in sense of smell can have a negative effect on our quality of life.

Smell is often our first response to stimuli.

It alerts us to fire before we see flames.
It makes us recoil before we taste rotten food.

Everybody likes a different smell
like somebody likes to smell perfumes
some like lemons,
some like flowers,
some like chocolates,
some like smell of  petrol
some even likes smelling coffee
some cheese and some cookies..

but the best among  all is
sweet smell of success

Smell is our need
Smell is something incredible
Without it out existence is nearly impossible..

© 2013 Akshat♥


Author's Note

Akshat♥
Please review and rate it..i will really appreciate you for giving your
valuable time..

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A well written piece and I noticed not one change of font colour - which is a real step forward for your writing.
You've mentioned a couple of excellent points relating smell to other senses too.
I particularly enjoyed this one because I've actually written a series on the senses.

Now that I've read this one I might post my series here too. Great job my friend.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Brilliant topic. :) I think you did justice to it. The choices in the smells you describe are memorable and anyone who reads your write will recall those to memory as I did. :) Well done.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem is really good. It made me remember all the smells you mentioned and some of the memories I associate with smells. That was really cool for me haha. Keep up the good work.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

my grandma lost her smell sense yes its really hard to live withouth smelling nice poem !:)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very good poem. well thought out and placed together in a way that makes it easy to follow and understand.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

it is well written ..i loved this line :but the best among all is
sweet smell of success...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome, heart touching, pretty, enjoyable, colorful.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very nice poem on the view of our sense of smell.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This poem was a very interesting read, you switch from a very educational voice, to an almost whimsical one. The effect was really singular. Well done and thanks for sharing.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a really neat write. I liked it a lot since its my kind of poem. :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

For me this was actually educational but that isn't a bad thing. I am simply stating I learned from this poem about our sense of smell and how it effects us individually.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Akshat♥

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