Smell

Smell

A Poem by Akshat♥
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Smell is so important..

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Have you ever wondered when you "smell the roses" in the spring time?
I guess yes you all do..

Smell is something that is too small to see with eyeball alone..

Our sense of smell is connected really well to our memory

like,the smell of popcorn can remind you of being at the movies
with a friend or the smell of rain reminds you of your partner..

The abilty of humans to perceive odors helps us to enjoy life

Our sense of smell also gives us warning,alerting us from danger signals
such as a gas leak,spoiled food,or a fire.
any loss in sense of smell can have a negative effect on our quality of life.

Smell is often our first response to stimuli.

It alerts us to fire before we see flames.
It makes us recoil before we taste rotten food.

Everybody likes a different smell
like somebody likes to smell perfumes
some like lemons,
some like flowers,
some like chocolates,
some like smell of  petrol
some even likes smelling coffee
some cheese and some cookies..

but the best among  all is
sweet smell of success

Smell is our need
Smell is something incredible
Without it out existence is nearly impossible..

© 2013 Akshat♥


Author's Note

Akshat♥
Please review and rate it..i will really appreciate you for giving your
valuable time..

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A well written piece and I noticed not one change of font colour - which is a real step forward for your writing.
You've mentioned a couple of excellent points relating smell to other senses too.
I particularly enjoyed this one because I've actually written a series on the senses.

Now that I've read this one I might post my series here too. Great job my friend.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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A poem that is vivid to the sense of smell, and you use definitive common items to relate, very sensory.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow..:) awesome.. Really there is nothing more sweet than the smell of success..:)
great work..
thanks for sharing..^_^

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Good shot..!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the smell of chocolate , popcorn, roses lemons coffee cheese cookies they all smell so good your poems are so amazing I wish I was great at writing stories and poems because,I love poems and stories

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like this, it was creative and genius topic. It truly is nearly impossible for us to exist without smell. For we've heard of the blind, the deaf, voiceless but, has anyone ever heard of many who could not smell. We all know how it feels when were sick with stuff nose and the uncomfortable-ness of it all. In some ways smelling is necessity and you have told us that very well. Nicely done with your writing and keep it up always thinking outside the box to the things right their in front of us.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Awesome piece. Very well written. There is nothing like the sweet smell of success. We are fueled by the idea of success, without we'd just stay in the house all day and do nothing, but the smell keeps us going.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Areal note mentioned Success is really counted sweet . Beautiful pen picture.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Stunning piece! =D Very nice about our senses. This poem was a joy to read. =) It also made me remember certain things as I read. =D love it!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Great piece. I love the smell of flowers!!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very beautiful and true poem! I really love your poems. Great work, keep it up :)

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Akshat♥

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