Nobody knows that I have a crush on you

Crush is something you can't resist from..it happens because it happens(for no reason)

You have me hypnotized,so mesmerized

Every time you talk to me,

I'm terrified to be me..

I'm too shy to speak

I just want everybody to disappear

just you and me be here

you have many dear friends

that make me emulous

I wish you would have known this someday

that I have a crush on you..

You are so busy in your own world

I wish you have known that I have

a crush on you..

You seem special everyday

your bright magical face

brought sunshine to me

Everybody is here but nobody knows

that I have a crush on you

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Chirinos20]

we always have fear. But how can you get pass the first step. How can you find love if you don't have the guts to tell that person what you feel. It is true, you might get turned down many times before you find love. This is the true beauty of finding love! Never let fear run your life. For life is beautiful. This is a great peace! Great job!

[Ravyne Hawke]

You've summed up the fear of rejection well in this piece. I think these words sum up the fear really well

I'm terrified to be me..

Don't we all feel that? well done

[Akshat♥]

Yes, We feel exactly that...sometimes it is shyness and sometimes fear of rejection
Thank you dear :)

[beautiful life]

Filled with emotional and sweet words..

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[smilempsn]

Well off course it has A REASON..!!
Something about the person attracted you, so you have a Crush on her.. rite :P

Very well explained though ^-^
'Everybody is here but nobody knows
that I have a crush on you' ^_-

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Parachutes and Sunshine]

I loved this! It seems so innocent and cute, and seemed like a song to me!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Krystal Nicole]

This was very well and beautifully written!! Great verb choice!! good write

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Anuvart]

I love crushes ...it felt so nice :)
emotions are so dense here ...

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Hitman]

I feel the same:)
crush is always feel nice..

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

This poem pretty much summarized high school. Well done. It may not have been your intent, but I related right away.

[Akshat♥]

My intent was pretty much the same :P
Thank you:)

[Suditi]

A very well written poem.
Crush! Something we all can relate to!
I love the honesty and the simplicity in your poems.
They are raw and beautiful.