I tried

trying sometimes presents you a place where everything is just seems like a miracle:)

I tried and tried and tried again
but its not working out

Its hard but I am trying..
giving everything I have..
still haven't found the right path..

I am trying to get close to it
but still far behind

Sometimes I get under it
grab it with my both arms
still far behind

It's getting worse the more I try

I am trying to sort it out
just the idea to do it remains laggard

One thought popped out from my mind
"I will try again tomorrow"

I try to push more
To give a last try

At last I succeeded 
feeling a big relief

Sometimes trying a lot
gives you a Success
its all the patience that counts at last

Author's Note

Try to enjoy this poem..please review this honestly..
and rate it too..i will really appreciate it:)

Reviews

[Bertie]

A simple poem with a painfully clear message.
I wonder if perhaps it's slightly repetitious...I understand that that feeds into the theme of trying again and again and again...I'd love to see you express this in a different form, more concise and limiting to see how you do; you're easily a good enough writer to do it. Maybe try taking the theme of the poem and putting it into the form of a haiku or a cinquain :)
But I reiterate, a nice poem

Very good. Positive and inspiring poem. Great job!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

Full of wisdom, I love it!

[Becky C Strukamp]

Success comes with not giving up. You have a wonderful concept here. Nice poem.

[Michael of Gilead]

Trying can become trying

[Daytonight]

It is so wonderful when our patience and endurance finally pay off! Great write. Keep up the good work!

[Dark Angel ~]

Try and try again... hard to do, especially when it looks like it's not working out :P
I liked this, it was very well written. :D

[light and ashes]

Try try try again..your poem gives hope to people that if they are persistant with trying over and over again and patient that they can succeed. It is so true. If you are persistant enough you can do anything you set your mind to.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

An almost testament of faith, well done

[A Risen Heroine.]

I really like this poem :)
Thank you so much for the RR :D

~A Fallen Heroine~