I tried

trying sometimes presents you a place where everything is just seems like a miracle:)

I tried and tried and tried again
but its not working out

Its hard but I am trying..
giving everything I have..
still haven't found the right path..

I am trying to get close to it
but still far behind

Sometimes I get under it
grab it with my both arms
still far behind

It's getting worse the more I try

I am trying to sort it out
just the idea to do it remains laggard

One thought popped out from my mind
"I will try again tomorrow"

I try to push more
To give a last try

At last I succeeded 
feeling a big relief

Sometimes trying a lot
gives you a Success
its all the patience that counts at last

Author's Note

Try to enjoy this poem..please review this honestly..
and rate it too..i will really appreciate it:)

Reviews

[Bertie]

A simple poem with a painfully clear message.
I wonder if perhaps it's slightly repetitious...I understand that that feeds into the theme of trying again and again and again...I'd love to see you express this in a different form, more concise and limiting to see how you do; you're easily a good enough writer to do it. Maybe try taking the theme of the poem and putting it into the form of a haiku or a cinquain :)
But I reiterate, a nice poem

[unknown]

Yes patience is hard at times when things aren't going our way, but we have to remember that everything has its appointed time.

[Raven Starhawk]

Patience is something some people lack and it tests relationships Thanks for writing this. It was a good read.

[Keevan]

Love it. :) Thanks for sharing.

[thoughts of jade]

i love how all of your poems are lessons in life, teaching us new things everytime... thanks for sharing this!!!

[brenda]

i love this too i can relate to it ! nice poem !:)

[Hatchling]

Keep writting. I love

[BrynnaW.]

Sounds like something I do every now and then. Good job! Teaches a lesson to all. Keep on writing!

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

It takes bravery to embark on such a journey,
but the reward is most certainly worth it.

[thuaners]

i love it! :D i agree... never stop trying! i can feel the emotion in the poem ^^