I tried

trying sometimes presents you a place where everything is just seems like a miracle:)

I tried and tried and tried again
but its not working out

Its hard but I am trying..
giving everything I have..
still haven't found the right path..

I am trying to get close to it
but still far behind

Sometimes I get under it
grab it with my both arms
still far behind

It's getting worse the more I try

I am trying to sort it out
just the idea to do it remains laggard

One thought popped out from my mind
"I will try again tomorrow"

I try to push more
To give a last try

At last I succeeded 
feeling a big relief

Sometimes trying a lot
gives you a Success
its all the patience that counts at last

Author's Note

Try to enjoy this poem..please review this honestly..
and rate it too..i will really appreciate it:)

Reviews

[Bertie]

A simple poem with a painfully clear message.
I wonder if perhaps it's slightly repetitious...I understand that that feeds into the theme of trying again and again and again...I'd love to see you express this in a different form, more concise and limiting to see how you do; you're easily a good enough writer to do it. Maybe try taking the theme of the poem and putting it into the form of a haiku or a cinquain :)
But I reiterate, a nice poem

[?]

nice!
If at first you dont suceed, try, try, again.

[Jenny Baby]

Nice!!!!!!!! :D

[Luna]

The message is a good one, that success often follows many failures. It needs some brushing up though because some of the stanzas that are present are very repetitive and can make a reader get lost, as well as some of the wording. Other than that, the concept it good and the poem itself isn't bad.

[Sunni Davis]

If at first you dont suceed, try,try again. I love the message and the inspiration behind your poem.

[Brad]

persistence can usually pay off...just depends on how stubborn you are

[nevermindfan1991]

Inspring, true and beautifully written. You really capture the pain and frustration of falling down and getting back, and the sweet taste of accomplishing a task.

[msharma]

beautiful painting of words and images well done!

[Groovy]

I love all the scene you've painted. It is so very lovely and delightful. Wonderful.

[stars are far]

nice poem
i loved this :)

[deeps]

I really enjoyed this write, I found some truth within this.