I tried

trying sometimes presents you a place where everything is just seems like a miracle:)

I tried and tried and tried again
but its not working out

Its hard but I am trying..
giving everything I have..
still haven't found the right path..

I am trying to get close to it
but still far behind

Sometimes I get under it
grab it with my both arms
still far behind

It's getting worse the more I try

I am trying to sort it out
just the idea to do it remains laggard

One thought popped out from my mind
"I will try again tomorrow"

I try to push more
To give a last try

At last I succeeded 
feeling a big relief

Sometimes trying a lot
gives you a Success
its all the patience that counts at last

Author's Note

Try to enjoy this poem..please review this honestly..
and rate it too..i will really appreciate it:)

Reviews

[Bertie]

A simple poem with a painfully clear message.
I wonder if perhaps it's slightly repetitious...I understand that that feeds into the theme of trying again and again and again...I'd love to see you express this in a different form, more concise and limiting to see how you do; you're easily a good enough writer to do it. Maybe try taking the theme of the poem and putting it into the form of a haiku or a cinquain :)
But I reiterate, a nice poem

[Neytri]

Good thought.
As you asked to review honestly, here I go.
'Its' getting worse, the more I try...
I would also like to advice you to use punctuations when needed.
Keep writing ;)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[-Scribe in Style-]

Very enjoyable read! Thanks!
Get up and try again... Every day is given to you to try and if you do that then only can you taste the success
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[Akshat♥]

Right! Thank you:)

[Ravyne Hawke]

A great message of never giving up. I think this is something we can all easily relate to. A couple of grammatical issues:

grabs it with my both arms (grab it with both my arms)

Its getting worse as I more try (Its getting worse the more I try)

Really enjoyed this. great job.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Patrick O'Neil]

I like the message, and i feel just like that, still trying, success ? not yet... not yet!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[beautiful life]

You have given a nice message through this poem :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Surbhi Khandelwal]

Nice message with simple words :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Anuvart]

Patience is so important in life..it really counts at last..
Nicely written piece :)

[Hitman]

Trying is too hard...when you can't see any path:(
filled with lot of emotions..

[sudeshna]

nicely written... and true its patience that only counts...

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

"You try, you fail, you try, you fail... But the only true failure is when you stop trying."