I will stay here

This is what you can do..when you love someone to infinite:)

I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life

Don't be hard on yourself 
be calm

I am here for you any time
just call me at any moment

You can tell me your secrets
You can trust me anytime

I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life

I have a heart just like you
But now its astray from me
to you,
So take care for it just like I do,
because I have no heart and you
have two.

Baby scathe me with truth
but never puff me with a lie.

I am all lost in your world 
to make you mine..

I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life

Author's Note

Please give honest reviews..any thoughts about it..
rate it also...i will really appreciate it:)

Reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

Again I enjoy the use of colors to flavor your poem. It is different and gives it a freshness. As for the poem itself...it was, for me, a reflection of my own inner struggles, desires and needs to be attached to a beautiful person whom takes up most of my time.

[Becky C Strukamp]

A devoted love offering. Well penned!

[Tom Benson]

Like Devil's Angel, I thought the emotion came out well, but once again with your work I'm mystified by the change of font colour. That sort of thing works well if for instance you use a different colour for some words which we then find out spell out the title of the poem. It also works to emphasise one or two important words.
I've read this three times and the change of font colour seems to be random which is a shame because it detracts from the writing.

[Sukriti Suki]

I like the emotion here. The font change distracted me a bit, except where you have heart in red, but this is personal choice.

[ScarlettTheDreamer]

'So take care for it just like I do,
cause I have no heart and you
have two.'
Fantastic lines, I so really loved it :)