I will stay here

This is what you can do..when you love someone to infinite:)

I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life

Don't be hard on yourself 
be calm

I am here for you any time
just call me at any moment

You can tell me your secrets
You can trust me anytime

I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life

I have a heart just like you
But now its astray from me
to you,
So take care for it just like I do,
because I have no heart and you
have two.

Baby scathe me with truth
but never puff me with a lie.

I am all lost in your world 
to make you mine..

I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life

Author's Note

Please give honest reviews..any thoughts about it..
rate it also...i will really appreciate it:)

Reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

Again I enjoy the use of colors to flavor your poem. It is different and gives it a freshness. As for the poem itself...it was, for me, a reflection of my own inner struggles, desires and needs to be attached to a beautiful person whom takes up most of my time.

[∂αʌ<..]

lovely poem!

Baby scathe me with truth
but never puff me with a lie.

amazing words you used..brought back memories boy!
keep it up!

[Alicia Hirshey]

I really enjoy the colors, they made the poem flavorful.

[?]

very nicely expressed, a strong love for another

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the strong and beautiful words. I like the direct and powerful emotion in the poem.
"Baby scathe me with truth
but never puff me with a lie."
Thank you for a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[anindita]

Beautiful.

[Groovy]

wonderful

[Sunni Davis]

I think everyone wishes for a love and devotion like you've expressed here. Very beautifully written.

[Lily Mae]

"I am lost in your world to make you mine" ..love that.. Another great write..xx

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

A nice love poem, with feelings felt. Nice work :)