I will stay here

This is what you can do..when you love someone to infinite:)

I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life

Don't be hard on yourself 
be calm

I am here for you any time
just call me at any moment

You can tell me your secrets
You can trust me anytime

I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life

I have a heart just like you
But now its astray from me
to you,
So take care for it just like I do,
because I have no heart and you
have two.

Baby scathe me with truth
but never puff me with a lie.

I am all lost in your world 
to make you mine..

I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life

Author's Note

Please give honest reviews..any thoughts about it..
rate it also...i will really appreciate it:)

Reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

Again I enjoy the use of colors to flavor your poem. It is different and gives it a freshness. As for the poem itself...it was, for me, a reflection of my own inner struggles, desires and needs to be attached to a beautiful person whom takes up most of my time.

[Kes]

I have no heart and you
have two.

I loved that bit!!
Your grammar isn't always 100%, but your subject matters, and methods of getting to the heart of these, are stunning.
Nice. :)

This is a wonderful piece, full of yearning.
Well done.

[Kyla H]

This is also very well put together, I like the sing-songy feel to it. Nicely done!

[Dark Angel ~]

Very sweet :)

[Daytonight]

I really like this one. I love what you had to say and how you said it. Keep up the great work!

[TheMizFit]

This is a very nice poem and the format added a lot to it. Very full of emotion and that's nice! Great job! :D

[Kenneth The Poet]

You do really well with yearning and heartache.

[Just Cat]

I really like evrything about this poem. The theme, the colours, the way it's been written. Beautifully done. I can relate to this as I fel like this towards my fiance and my best friend (strange maybe, I know)

"Baby scathe me with the truth
but never puff me with a lie." LOVE THESE LINES.

A wonderful write. Good work :)

[StarSandwich]

Such a lovely poem, its flow is fantastic. good use of the colours to the poem it give off a good vibe to the words. :D

[snopadelic]

really nice poem