I will stay here

This is what you can do..when you love someone to infinite:)

I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life

Don't be hard on yourself 
be calm

I am here for you any time
just call me at any moment

You can tell me your secrets
You can trust me anytime

I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life

I have a heart just like you
But now its astray from me
to you,
So take care for it just like I do,
because I have no heart and you
have two.

Baby scathe me with truth
but never puff me with a lie.

I am all lost in your world 
to make you mine..

I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life

Author's Note

Please give honest reviews..any thoughts about it..
rate it also...i will really appreciate it:)

Reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

Again I enjoy the use of colors to flavor your poem. It is different and gives it a freshness. As for the poem itself...it was, for me, a reflection of my own inner struggles, desires and needs to be attached to a beautiful person whom takes up most of my time.

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good one..!!!

[Ruth]

Honest thoughts is that this is beautifully crafted! Amazing work xx

[brenda]

this is so sweet and beauitful love the poem !:)

Good write. I like the message and the form of this. The words you use get the point across but sometimes read 'choppy'. Meaning they don't always go easy into the next and that can interrupt the reader. You might want to restructure this one a little to fine tune the wording.

[Katseye]

To add anything would be just to repeat what others have said. Very well stated.

[Hatchling]

I like it!!!

[stars are far]

lovely...
really great, i loved this a lot :)

[EMF]

Wonderful. One word reviews do speak of someone trying to rush through read requests. Yet, this poem was simply that

[Lively]

Simple and straight. Good

[Short.Nerd]

Wonderful write. I liked the colors you used and the flow of this. Keep up the good work:)