I will stay here

This is what you can do..when you love someone to infinite:)

I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life

Don't be hard on yourself 
be calm

I am here for you any time
just call me at any moment

You can tell me your secrets
You can trust me anytime

I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life

I have a heart just like you
But now its astray from me
to you,
So take care for it just like I do,
because I have no heart and you
have two.

Baby scathe me with truth
but never puff me with a lie.

I am all lost in your world 
to make you mine..

I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life

Author's Note

Please give honest reviews..any thoughts about it..
rate it also...i will really appreciate it:)

Reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

Again I enjoy the use of colors to flavor your poem. It is different and gives it a freshness. As for the poem itself...it was, for me, a reflection of my own inner struggles, desires and needs to be attached to a beautiful person whom takes up most of my time.

[joshua deathdealer]

Beautiful expression of love. I also like the color scheme.

[Calypso]

This seems to be told on the side of either a girl that has been hurt or someone who is love sick. Either way great write!

[abhas]

well done... so simple and yet beautiful... and the colours add that tinge of vibrant nature which makes it all the more great...

[Jazique]

That is so sweet. I love the wrote your poem with the colors and specifically for certain word . I enjoyed the poem in general though because truly showed a committed relationship of the two people love for one another to wait on each other and loved the metaphor of the"So take care for it just like I do,
because I have no heart and you
have two." So nicely done and keep up the excellent writings.

[Anthony M Smith Jr]

HaHo(Hello)
Put my life in your hands, as my life, bears no recognition, through your actions we are one! One mind! One Spirit! One Love!
Very nice poem from a awesome mind!
Light and Life!
TT-TTO-NI-K
Elk

[dreaming dame]

I love the wording. It's sweet and well written.:)

[honeyleens]

I like this, it shows a struggle to form trust and a relationship between to people. I loved this line "but never puff me with a lie." What an interesting way to say this! Very simple and direct, but with lots of emotion. Good job!

[John Patrick Robbins AK..]

It moves almost like a song many degrees and speaks of peoples tendancy or a relationship that consumes us this write got me for its fast and cuts to the point very well done honestly its a very good write no flaws cheers to this one

it connects yet i also feel it coul;d have gone on awhile perfect though my friend keep posting

[Sleeping Maiden]

Wow. I love this poem! SO good! It flows really well. Its dreamy.. and thoughtful. Great write! =D

[Cassiopia Summers]

An inner battle we all must go through at least once in our lives. You described the situation here easily, maybe you are within this battle now?