I will stay here

This is what you can do..when you love someone to infinite:)

I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life

Don't be hard on yourself 
be calm

I am here for you any time
just call me at any moment

You can tell me your secrets
You can trust me anytime

I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life

I have a heart just like you
But now its astray from me
to you,
So take care for it just like I do,
because I have no heart and you
have two.

Baby scathe me with truth
but never puff me with a lie.

I am all lost in your world 
to make you mine..

I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life

Author's Note

Please give honest reviews..any thoughts about it..
rate it also...i will really appreciate it:)

Reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

Again I enjoy the use of colors to flavor your poem. It is different and gives it a freshness. As for the poem itself...it was, for me, a reflection of my own inner struggles, desires and needs to be attached to a beautiful person whom takes up most of my time.

[alegria]

superb...amazing and too good...:) how sweet it is to have written it..and lucky is d person who u have kept in mind while writing it:))

[Violeta]

My one comment is about the colors you use in your poetry. It draws my attention away from the words enough so that I can barely concentrate on what is being conveyed. You have potential :) Keep up the good work!

[Dreamer]

Expresses honest feelings. Feelings of someone who must love with all their heart. For ppl like ur persona, its always difficult to walk away when they have invested alot of themselves into someone. The idea of staying around somehow always seems better than the reality of leaving. I guess its bcuz the first choice gets them the opportunity to feel as if the person is still a part of their life...or more importantly, tht they are still a part of that persons life. Yet, despite this, sometimes we realize tht its probably best to move on even though it will hurt. In staying, we're probably making ourselves emotionally and mentally upset. Great poem

[Yina]

LOVE IT!!:)
So take care for it just like I do,
because I have no heart and you have two
Beautiful!:)

[jayfray]

Very nice poem. My one comment about your writing is the use of colors. It's very hard for me as a reader to pay attention to the poem, when my eyes are being drawn to the solo words in bright colors, Maybe try to make a whole sentence in a different color or keep a constant color, but in the end its your art! do what you want.

[Lane-roe]

"So take care for it just like I do, because I have no heart and you have two." love these lines! Playful and sweet-my favourite kind of poem. Good work :)

[Pramod]

"I have a heart just like you
But now its astray from me
to you,
So take care for it just like I do,
because I have no heart and you
have two."

These r really killing lines

[Richard Williams]

A good emotional sentiment. A fine last line.

[Vaishali..^_^]

So Beautiful.. :) I loved it.. :) great write..
Thanks for sharing.. ^_^

[msharma]

Colorful poem with multi flavored essence.