I will stay here

This is what you can do..when you love someone to infinite:)

I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life

Don't be hard on yourself 
be calm

I am here for you any time
just call me at any moment

You can tell me your secrets
You can trust me anytime

I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life

I have a heart just like you
But now its astray from me
to you,
So take care for it just like I do,
because I have no heart and you
have two.

Baby scathe me with truth
but never puff me with a lie.

I am all lost in your world 
to make you mine..

I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life

Author's Note

Please give honest reviews..any thoughts about it..
rate it also...i will really appreciate it:)

Reviews

[Raven Starhawk]

Again I enjoy the use of colors to flavor your poem. It is different and gives it a freshness. As for the poem itself...it was, for me, a reflection of my own inner struggles, desires and needs to be attached to a beautiful person whom takes up most of my time.

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

"Because I have no heart and you have two." Beautifully written.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you:)

[Amber "Victoriomantic" ..]

It's difficult to want to give people all your time, or if you have to wait for them a long time. I hope the wait was or is worth the effort.

[Akshat♥]

till now am just waiting :(

[Amber "Victoriomantic" Hart]

I'm sorry to hear that. I hope your time isn't wasted.

[Akshat♥]

I hope same,lol

[Kate Hunter]

Well done, Akshat. I loved it. It was really cute.

[kaylynnmelody♥]

i thought this was a great piece of writing! thank you for posting it. i really have no complaints! keep writing!

[Ian Faraway]

I could feel the love and the dedication and longing in this poem. Keep it as is. J'adore.

[Raindrop]

It really hit the spot. :) I loved it!

[Akshat♥]

Thanks everyone for your kind reviews:)

[Dahlia Phoenix]

The sweetest devotion to be there for someone no matter what hour of the day it is.

"I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life"

True emotions shown and the beautiful image of one being a good person and caring for others than oneself. Amazing!

[LinBin]

flowing, glowing, rich and profound x

[angelina]

Reminds me of the life of a tree. so sturdy and something we depend on for our every breath even if we are oblivious at times to it's existence. Your poem has a very nice feel to it.
angelina