I will stay here

I will stay here

A Poem by Akshat♥
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This is what you can do..when you love someone to infinite:)

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I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life

Don't be hard on yourself 
be
calm

I am here for you any time
just call me at any moment

You can tell me your
secrets
You can trust me anytime

I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life

I have a
heart just like you
But now its astray from me
to you,
So take care for it just like I do,
because I have no heart and you
have two.

Baby
scathe me with truth
but never
puff me with a lie.

I am all
lost in your world 
to make you mine..

I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life


© 2013 Akshat♥


Author's Note

Akshat♥
Please give honest reviews..any thoughts about it..
rate it also...i will really appreciate it:)

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Again I enjoy the use of colors to flavor your poem. It is different and gives it a freshness. As for the poem itself...it was, for me, a reflection of my own inner struggles, desires and needs to be attached to a beautiful person whom takes up most of my time.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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A beautiful poem. It makes me wonder what it's like to truly love someone this way. Being the age I am, I really only know the love of family and friends. You were able to give me a sweet look at what it most certainly could be like, though.
Thanks for sharing!

Posted 11 Years Ago


I like the repetition and the overall idea of being there for someone no matter what. Love the two hearts image. well done

Posted 11 Years Ago


Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
I really like how you use colors to write your poems :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you dear :)
That reminded me of a song.... :)
Nice flow ...

Posted 11 Years Ago


Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
ahh...blew off :P

Posted 11 Years Ago


Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
There's a disarming honesty and sincerity in it. It's simple yet very beautiful. Well done.. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
love is so pure :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
nice:)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
hmmmmmmm ..... no words... just felt each and every line... nicely written

Posted 11 Years Ago


Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

Thank you :)
Baby scathe me with truth
but never puff me with a lie.
these lines are like base of any true relationship, gud one

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshat♥

11 Years Ago

I know..thank you:)

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Added on June 28, 2011
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Akshat♥
Akshat♥

New Delhi, India



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