I will stay here
A Poem by
Akshat♥
This is what you can do..when you love someone to infinite:)
I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life Don't be hard on yourself be calm I am here for you any time just call me at any moment You can tell me your secrets You can trust me anytime I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life I have a heart just like you But now its astray from me to you, So take care for it just like I do, because I have no heart and you have two. Baby scathe me with truth but never puff me with a lie. I am all lost in your world to make you mine.. I will stay here for you till I finish my entire life
© 2013 Akshat♥
Author's Note
Please give honest reviews..any thoughts about it..
rate it also...i will really appreciate it:)
Featured Review
Again I enjoy the use of colors to flavor your poem. It is different and gives it a freshness. As for the poem itself...it was, for me, a reflection of my own inner struggles, desires and needs to be attached to a beautiful person whom takes up most of my time.
Posted 13 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
Reviews
A beautiful poem. It makes me wonder what it's like to truly love someone this way. Being the age I am, I really only know the love of family and friends. You were able to give me a sweet look at what it most certainly could be like, though.
Thanks for sharing!
Posted 11 Years Ago
A beautiful poem. It makes me wonder what it's like to truly love someone this way. Being the age I am, I really only know the love of family and friends. You were able to give me a sweet look at what it most certainly could be like, though.
Thanks for sharing!
I like the repetition and the overall idea of being there for someone no matter what. Love the two hearts image. well done
Posted 11 Years Ago
I like the repetition and the overall idea of being there for someone no matter what. Love the two hearts image. well done
11 Years Ago
Thank you dear :)
I really like how you use colors to write your poems :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
I really like how you use colors to write your poems :)
11 Years Ago
Thank you dear :)
That reminded me of a song.... :)
Nice flow ...
Posted 11 Years Ago
That reminded me of a song.... :)
Nice flow ...
11 Years Ago
Thank you :)
ahh...blew off :P
Posted 11 Years Ago
ahh...blew off :P
11 Years Ago
Thank you :)
There's a disarming honesty and sincerity in it. It's simple yet very beautiful. Well done.. :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
There's a disarming honesty and sincerity in it. It's simple yet very beautiful. Well done.. :)
11 Years Ago
Thank you :)
love is so pure :)
Posted 11 Years Ago
love is so pure :)
11 Years Ago
Thank you :)
nice:)
Posted 11 Years Ago
nice:)
11 Years Ago
Thank you :)
hmmmmmmm ..... no words... just felt each and every line... nicely written
Posted 11 Years Ago
hmmmmmmm ..... no words... just felt each and every line... nicely written
11 Years Ago
Thank you :)
Baby scathe me with truth
but never puff me with a lie.
these lines are like base of any true relationship, gud one
Posted 11 Years Ago
Baby scathe me with truth
but never puff me with a lie.
these lines are like base of any true relationship, gud one
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
I know..thank you:)
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Added on June 28, 2011
Last Updated on July 26, 2013
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Akshat♥ New Delhi, India
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