Voices

Sometimes voices disturb us or give us a path where we get involved deeply...

Voices echos in my mind
making my thoughts wild.

Voices sharpen the situation
diminishing the silence around.

Situation getting worse and

I am going crazier every second.

These voices are harder to stop
trying is also a waste of time.

These voices wants to say something
about life
about struggle
about childhood
about peer pressure
about a bright future
about responsibilities
about everything ...

These situations made me think harder

Are these things crazier
or I am believing in them.

Hard to try
Hard to find
these voices are making me blind.

Some voices making me strong
giving me experience in this
field of ignorance.

Balancing the situation between
bad and good voices,
I throw myself in this field of choices.

Wish me good luck
Wish me a bright future
these voices cannot break me apart
Since in every road there are many paths.

I will make my own voice for others
to compete and destroy these bad voices.

Author's Note

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i will really appreciate it..

Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

Great poem. Those pesky voices. I like the way you structured the stanzas and used color. Our inner voice to me, Is something that our gut feels warning us or saying yes this feels right. Sometimes those voices are good you just have to be in tune and follow the positive. Love the poem.

[Daytonight]

I like what you plan to do to the bad voices. Well done! Keep on penning.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Great work!

[Just Cat]

Interesting.
I love the use of colour in this, it gives it a brightness and highlights important aspects. For me, it also makes the crazy stuff seem more crazy! lol.
You've inspired me to try and use colours in my own writing, so thank you for being an inspiration. :)

[snopadelic]

I really like this. it's interesting ypu've given voice to the those thoughts we all have in our heads lol glad to know i'm no the only one that thinks its a bit mad. The only thing i'm not keen on is different words in differnt colours, I found it slighlty distracting

[∂αʌ<..]

i think this one is really a great one and personnaly i think that you associate your colours to your perceptions of the words you used!
like red for the word HEART or CRAZIER because of the impact those words have on you!...a good perception and somewhat a little peak in your inner life, your inner world---hmmmmm, inner voices!
loved this!

[Groovy]

beautiful poem.

[anindita]

Good one. The struggle within us to choose between the wrong and the right path has been well brought out.

[Sunni Davis]

Ah, yes, the inner voice. We all have it and sometimes its pouder than others. I really liked the way you expressed the ideas here. Very nicely written.

[Lively]

Nice one..

[Lily Mae]

Ah, those inner voices. We all have them.. I just hate it when there louder then my true voice.. :) Great write..xx