Voices

Sometimes voices disturb us or give us a path where we get involved deeply...

Voices echos in my mind
making my thoughts wild.

Voices sharpen the situation
diminishing the silence around.

Situation getting worse and

I am going crazier every second.

These voices are harder to stop
trying is also a waste of time.

These voices wants to say something
about life
about struggle
about childhood
about peer pressure
about a bright future
about responsibilities
about everything ...

These situations made me think harder

Are these things crazier
or I am believing in them.

Hard to try
Hard to find
these voices are making me blind.

Some voices making me strong
giving me experience in this
field of ignorance.

Balancing the situation between
bad and good voices,
I throw myself in this field of choices.

Wish me good luck
Wish me a bright future
these voices cannot break me apart
Since in every road there are many paths.

I will make my own voice for others
to compete and destroy these bad voices.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Becky C Strukamp]

Great poem. Those pesky voices. I like the way you structured the stanzas and used color. Our inner voice to me, Is something that our gut feels warning us or saying yes this feels right. Sometimes those voices are good you just have to be in tune and follow the positive. Love the poem.

[melissa]

Thanks for sending me your poems they are great I hope to read more

[Jazique]

Nice job. Everyone has the good voice and bad voices that happen to follow them around in life. We know who to listen to but, when everything is pressure to you go crazy with that voice. You did an excellent job with the inner voice that lies in us all and and color coordination is always a excellent idea radiating creativity. Keep up the wonderful writings.

[Myenigma]

interesting poem! voices are everywhere we just gotta listen, not all of them are sane and not all of them are crazy.

[Frantzuu]

I really like the things you write about. I enjoy the approach you take, and your style of writing. You're a very good writer, and seam very wise. Awesome poem. Those voices can sometimes make us do good things, or bad things. Awesome write.

[Richard Williams]

I like the theme of voices, which you well with fine lines like, "Voices sharpen the situation / diminishing the silence around." That has a good sound to it. It's interesting with good imagination, and you end it quite well with punch. Kudos.

[theopenbook]

lovely expression;) i wonder from where you get that:0 great job:)

[Ruth]

We have to make our own voice, paramount to today! So many others can swamp! This is intense love, great poem xx

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

C.O.L.O.R.F.U.L.

[Cassiopia Summers]

The old gut feeling we all have, but only few listen too. We should all listen to it, because it is our sixth sense that helps us tune in to what is wrong and right.

[brenda]

yeah ! agree with you i hear voces like what you hear in the poem too !!! nice poem '!:)