Why You Have Left

some people left our lives after making a mark in our heart... this poem is about same person...left unsaid:(

Some things still I want to say

You are not here anymore..

this craziness breaks me away

Not in my thoughts

Not in my words

Not in my calls

Not in my unseen messages

But still you are there

in my heart

Sometimes I want to share a lucid dream

to make you mine.

Some chances I haven't taken up yet

This mistake pays me recently

You are not here anymore..

this craziness breaks me away

Not in my thoughts

Not in my words

Not in my calls

Not in my unseen messages

But still you are there

in my dreams

I love my Dreams

since you are there in it

with no boundaries.

I love my heart

since you are there in it

with each new blood forming
each day.

I love me

since you are there in it

with each part belongs to you... 

Author's Note

Review & Rate this poem ...i hope you like it..
give any type of your comments..
i will really appreciate it:)

Reviews

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

Okay...I really hate to start off a review on a negative note, but I have to say this...when there are typos at the beginning of a poem (there should be a space in "somethings", and "crazyness" is spelled "craziness"), it distracts me immediately from what you're trying to say. It's difficult for a poem to really suck me in when I'm wondering if there are going to be more typos all the way through. Other than that, once I reread this, it was enjoyable! Arwa Bharmal is right that this could describe 'Inception' very well!

[Lively]

Akshat you are an awesome writer, simple but attractive. Your poems very easily attract others' consideration. Its like "Tumhari poems man ko moh leti hain"

[Art Sun]

how love does stay within our hearts...dreams...and memories...

[Kes]

Sweet. Liked it. =P

[?]

Full of emotions, thinking this would make a beautiful love song.
Very nice, love the pics that were added.

[Enigma]

Very colourful and sentimental. Great write. :)

[Lily Mae]

To know love and to have it slip away..is heart wrenching...xxx

[Coyote Poetry]

Life can be unfair. Love is best and worst day in a life. But sometime the memories can make us feel better and happy. Someone said "Better to have loved and lost. Then never loved at all." I like the ending to the poem. Thank you for the artwork and strong words. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Tasha]

This was very emotional, I really loved it. :)

[ShaneBerry]

wow. this hit me right in the chest, i am in a simi-relationship with a beautiful woman with whom i truely believe is the one, but i rarely get to see her, so my nights are filled with tears and dreams, lucid dreams, are the best ones, for there is no time, no bounries, whatever i want to happen happens. this was an intrigueing and truely marvelouse write! i am sooooo sorry it took soo long to review it, and i really wish i had read it sooner lol.

the images are each groundbreakingly resibelant of a music video, and the reitition of stanzas sugggest a song tone, great work!!!!! thank you very much for shareing this piece of your heart with the rest of us.


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[TheMizFit]

Very sweet and emotional :)