Why You Have Left

some people left our lives after making a mark in our heart... this poem is about same person...left unsaid:(

Some things still I want to say

You are not here anymore..

this craziness breaks me away

Not in my thoughts

Not in my words

Not in my calls

Not in my unseen messages

But still you are there

in my heart

Sometimes I want to share a lucid dream

to make you mine.

Some chances I haven't taken up yet

This mistake pays me recently

You are not here anymore..

this craziness breaks me away

Not in my thoughts

Not in my words

Not in my calls

Not in my unseen messages

But still you are there

in my dreams

I love my Dreams

since you are there in it

with no boundaries.

I love my heart

since you are there in it

with each new blood forming
each day.

I love me

since you are there in it

with each part belongs to you... 

Author's Note

Review & Rate this poem ...i hope you like it..
give any type of your comments..
i will really appreciate it:)

Reviews

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

Okay...I really hate to start off a review on a negative note, but I have to say this...when there are typos at the beginning of a poem (there should be a space in "somethings", and "crazyness" is spelled "craziness"), it distracts me immediately from what you're trying to say. It's difficult for a poem to really suck me in when I'm wondering if there are going to be more typos all the way through. Other than that, once I reread this, it was enjoyable! Arwa Bharmal is right that this could describe 'Inception' very well!

[stars are far]

love this a lot!!
great work :)

[honeyleens]

Very lovely sad poem. I liked the line: Sometimes I want to share a lucid dream
to make you mine. Great job.

[ErinLovesYou<3]

Wow, I never thought of it that way "I love my heart since you are there in it". It makes alot of sense to be honest. I really liked this poem. It hit me kind of hard, I can definitely relate.

[light and ashes]

This poem made me think of many people that have passed in my life, all kinds of past relationships, and the impact that they have on your heart.
Really great poem

[Emily Rae]

I love the line,"sometimes I want to share a lucid dream to make you mine," nice write.

[GoneCountrywild]

This is such a heartfelt poem, I can feel the sadness it shows the missing them and not having them in your life anymore. Dreaming of the times you were together and missing them terribly.

This is an amazing piece of work. It definitely touched base with me. Very deep and drowning with emotion and longing.

[sweta'karman']

"with each new blood forming each day" beatifies the feeling of cherishing and owning someone without the consent....very nicely put up....

[snopadelic]

Very nicely presented, i liked the pictures and the coulerful writing, Very good

[Brad]

very artsy construction, at first i thought it a bit scattered and hard to follow, but once i got into the groove of it all, it flowed like honey