Why You Have Left

some people left our lives after making a mark in our heart... this poem is about same person...left unsaid:(

Some things still I want to say

You are not here anymore..

this craziness breaks me away

Not in my thoughts

Not in my words

Not in my calls

Not in my unseen messages

But still you are there

in my heart

Sometimes I want to share a lucid dream

to make you mine.

Some chances I haven't taken up yet

This mistake pays me recently

You are not here anymore..

this craziness breaks me away

Not in my thoughts

Not in my words

Not in my calls

Not in my unseen messages

But still you are there

in my dreams

I love my Dreams

since you are there in it

with no boundaries.

I love my heart

since you are there in it

with each new blood forming
each day.

I love me

since you are there in it

with each part belongs to you... 

Author's Note

Review & Rate this poem ...i hope you like it..
give any type of your comments..
i will really appreciate it:)

Reviews

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

Okay...I really hate to start off a review on a negative note, but I have to say this...when there are typos at the beginning of a poem (there should be a space in "somethings", and "crazyness" is spelled "craziness"), it distracts me immediately from what you're trying to say. It's difficult for a poem to really suck me in when I'm wondering if there are going to be more typos all the way through. Other than that, once I reread this, it was enjoyable! Arwa Bharmal is right that this could describe 'Inception' very well!

[Valentine]

Typos mean little...the word flow and meaning behind them mean all to me..Loved this as it reminds me of me so much..Kathie

[Dove]

I love this! the words flow together nicely and i can feel the love in this. Great job!

[alegria]

i loved it...can feel the immense love n care shown...written splendidly well:))

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good one..!!!

[Dahlia Phoenix]

The pictures are expressed in a way that relates to your poem which is filled with a world filled with mistakes that have led to a bitter craziness that wants to absorb someone. One thing though: Work on the typos that way it won't be criticized so harshly by some people. :)
Good job!

[melissa]

I love thus poem so much it is so amazing keep them coming

[Akshat♥]

Thank you everyone for reviewing my work..
and giving your precious time..

[Sleeping Maiden]

Another great poem! =D I love it! Its saddening to read.. but relatable. The pain and yearning for that person is strong. The things we want to say to someone who left abruptly is hard... it doesn't leave us. It stays until you say it or find a way to letting that person know.. whatever it may be. This poem is powerful to me. Fantastic write!!! I love it.

[theopenbook]

this was beautiful:) the pain the loneliness..... i know that:) lovely verse:)

[Becky C Strukamp]

Very cleverly constructed. I love the structure and pictures they way you have woven them together. Beautiful!!