Why You Have Left

some people left our lives after making a mark in our heart... this poem is about same person...left unsaid:(

Some things still I want to say

You are not here anymore..

this craziness breaks me away

Not in my thoughts

Not in my words

Not in my calls

Not in my unseen messages

But still you are there

in my heart

Sometimes I want to share a lucid dream

to make you mine.

Some chances I haven't taken up yet

This mistake pays me recently

You are not here anymore..

this craziness breaks me away

Not in my thoughts

Not in my words

Not in my calls

Not in my unseen messages

But still you are there

in my dreams

I love my Dreams

since you are there in it

with no boundaries.

I love my heart

since you are there in it

with each new blood forming
each day.

I love me

since you are there in it

with each part belongs to you... 

Author's Note

Review & Rate this poem ...i hope you like it..
give any type of your comments..
i will really appreciate it:)

Reviews

[Blue Moon Ice Cream]

Okay...I really hate to start off a review on a negative note, but I have to say this...when there are typos at the beginning of a poem (there should be a space in "somethings", and "crazyness" is spelled "craziness"), it distracts me immediately from what you're trying to say. It's difficult for a poem to really suck me in when I'm wondering if there are going to be more typos all the way through. Other than that, once I reread this, it was enjoyable! Arwa Bharmal is right that this could describe 'Inception' very well!

[Ravyne Hawke]

Sad poem with a hint of redemption at the end. I think the repetition worked well in this piece. Nice job.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Lily Finch]

so beautiful :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear..i will really love it if u have expressed bit more :)

[Lily Finch]

Mostly m speechless after reading such a beautiful poems ..:)

[Akshat♥]

record your face when you are speechless and attach it in reviews lol :D
Thank you ..i understand :)

[Lily Finch]

lol :D

[Lily Finch]

lol :D

[Akshat♥]

oops :D

[beautiful life]

Pictures are saying a lot...you have passed the message in this poem
pretty well!!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Anuvart]

It is too sad :(

[Hitman]

nice pics..adds up to the poem..
overall nice write:)

[sudeshna]

i felt what you were really trying to say... but what bothers me is the use of color... it distracted me... otherwise i like the way u write

[Elizabeth Marie O'neil-..]

"I love my heart, since you are there in it-" Really made me warm inside lol Good write.

[Amber "Victoriomantic" ..]

Your portrayal of lost love is very profound.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Norma M Sutton]

I love the emotion in this.

[kaylynnmelody♥]

this is a great write. thank you for posting it! and sending me a read request. keep writing.. and i love your use of color!