A Big Mistake

here i want to tell about my mistakes... trying to correct them in my remaining life:(

Sometimes I think talking to you

is a mistake

Telling you my feelings is a mistake

you never try to understand my feelings..

I was stupid to take you

as my everything.

I was stupid to see you

as my bestfriend

you never try to be in my position

Sometimes I feel like 

giving up on you.

I will always remember this mistake

and will never do it again ever.

Mistakes taught us not to trust 

someone again 

But it really pains when 

that someone really means a lot.

Author's Note

Please review and rate it..any thing you want to say..
i will be very happy to see it..
either good or bad...thank you..

Reviews

[anindita]

I know how it feels when you consider someone to be your everything and then one fine day you realise you are nothing more than an option in his or her life. The feeling sucks!!
Anything which comes out straight from the heart is always good and appreciable!!

[☯]

An honest and truthfully written piece. Mistakes may change us, change others, or destroy, maybe keep things same. Keep it up. :)

[indu]

thats plain truth. you trust and love someone and to know later, we mean nothing to them, its heart breaking. nice work :)

[the-One-with-the-Darkne..]

Very good. I really like this.

[Chelsea]

I understand your poem, and quite frankly i dont think your alone. everyone makes mistakes, especially when i comes down to who to trust and who not to trust. however, lovely poem. i truly enjoyed it!

[Jazique]

Nicely done. mistakes have been know the only way to learn and improve in life. Short and colorful with emphasis on certian words. You did a wonderful ; keep it up because I rate this as good.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This is really emotional work.
Your poem shows a lot of personal growth.

[unknown]

So many lack the ability to empathize with another. Enjoyed this poem as it is one I can relate to.

[MichelleClay]

I don’t believe in mistakes as such. Every decision that people make - that they perceive to be an error, later becomes apparent that it has a purpose. The good and bad choices in life are all designed to teach us a lesson, to be better people.

[brenda]

can relate to it i bet many people can too this is great your poem really gives off a true reality of the world of how you love is more painful