A Big Mistake

here i want to tell about my mistakes... trying to correct them in my remaining life:(

Sometimes I think talking to you

is a mistake

Telling you my feelings is a mistake

you never try to understand my feelings..

I was stupid to take you

as my everything.

I was stupid to see you

as my bestfriend

you never try to be in my position

Sometimes I feel like 

giving up on you.

I will always remember this mistake

and will never do it again ever.

Mistakes taught us not to trust 

someone again 

But it really pains when 

that someone really means a lot.

Author's Note

Please review and rate it..any thing you want to say..
i will be very happy to see it..
either good or bad...thank you..

Reviews

[anindita]

I know how it feels when you consider someone to be your everything and then one fine day you realise you are nothing more than an option in his or her life. The feeling sucks!!
Anything which comes out straight from the heart is always good and appreciable!!

[Jitender Kaur]

its a sweet poem but i think mistakes teaches us to chose people wisely n it makes us strong... yes it takes time to move on but if we dont make mistakes then we cant move a step forward....

[Akshat♥]

I agree with you..thank you

[Jitender Kaur]

your welcome :)

[Akshat♥]

ok (^_^)

[Saumya]

sometimes only few words say and tell so much, that the entire book even can never express...
and this is a fine example of what i stated..

i could completely feel the emotions carried by these words,
yes, there are some 'creatures' id say, instead of people, who are like that you stated..
we try hard to fulfill all their needs, be the way they want etc.
but they always have their own path and speed to walk through..
and as the saying goes,
we should never blame ourselves for the pains we suffer given by the others, but we should rather be satisfied that we played our part well, and this is exactly the only truth that matters:)

and hopefully, life further rewards us for reuniting our strengths and being strong,
and maybe what we face now, and how the people are be completely different later.. and its all not the main scene, but only the climax of life...

and, as far as people are concerned, let me tell you very clearly, they will never and can never be the way we want...and that's the bitter truth

its never a mistake to trust anyone or be good with them...
but yes i think, the answer is "expectation"..
this is the element that sadly hurts at the end...

very eloquent as always, and a great write:)
well done

[Akshat♥]

Thank you so much saumya :)

[Saumya]

you're welcome! :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

I think these words are important to the relationship of these two:

you never try to be in my position

When someone cannot reasonably infer the other side of an argument and only think me me me.. then the relationship will never survive. It's best to just get out of it if you can. You did an excellent job of telling us how you feel in this poem. well done.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Patrick O'Neil]

Agreement with all the comments below. True Message.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[beautiful life]

Poem is really nice
made an impact on me :)

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[smilempsn]

Mistakes... Bad experiences....Sad things... Make life worthwhile...
Well thatz just my thoughts.... Because,
If we wont do mistakes - we will never learn...
If we don't have Bad experiences - we cannot have experience at all..
If we don't have Sad things - then we wont appreciate Happy things...

[Akshat♥]

I completely agree with you..Thank you :)

[smilempsn]

^-^

[Anuvart]

Mistakes we learn from them...
life it teaches us so much:)

[Hitman]

In life mistakes are always there..
but important thing is to learn from your mistakes:)

[sudeshna]

what i didn't like in this poem is the use of the buddha quote... as it breaks the flow... i got lil distracted otherwise nice work...

[Nupur]

easy to relate with these lines when u go through it, but still i'll not say that its a mistake cauz my feelings were so true no not were still are true it wasnt a mistake from my side........

[Akshat♥]

I disagree...If u give your valuable time to someone..
build a relationship and then it breaks into infinite part..
it kind of hurts forever..

[Nupur]

it surely hurts i didnt say it wont, my point is i'll still not state that it was my mistake cauz it wasnt......

[Akshat♥]

maybe..