You know already

Some feelings are all hidden..taking that out needs some courage.. wanting to do the things you have never done before.. is something really tough :)

Words which I wanted to say 

I didn't say

I think you knew them already

Things which I wanted to show 

I didn't shown  them either

I think you felt them already

Dreams which I have seen

I didn't tell you

I think you knew them already

I have some hidden secrets

which I wanted to tell you

I think telling  you all this

makes you sad..

I try to tell you only truth

but somehow can't help myself

so told you a lie

I think you know these lies already

I am in a position 

where I know that you know 

all these feelings already

so I can't help myself 

on believing  you. .

 

Author's Note

please give honest reviews..give ratings also:)
read carefully before reviewing. . .

Reviews

[Dahlia Phoenix]

This is completely new. I love the way you use these pictures to formulate with the poem resulting in an outstanding art piece. Not all the time we need words but the simple sense of seeing what's happening also can be poetry itself. When it comes to loving someone, sometimes lies can be a temporary dose but in the end, they will discover the truth.

[brenda]

this is so sweet lucky girl ! this is really sweet!!

[Priyankaabhilaashi]

Good pictures and words..!!!

[A Risen Heroine.]

This is a beautiful piece!

~A Fallen Heroine~

[HappyTaylor]

I like the format and the pictures. :) It helps set the mood in my mind. But beyond that, this a really nice poem. It is expressed clearly and beautifully. Good job!

[Aleyah]

I like the raw & unhidden emotion shown in this. It's really "real" and expresses what you feel nicely to the reader. Great poem :)

[ब्र&#..]

this was a really beautiful poem great job, well written!
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-Meja Malina

Beautiful pictures, creative styling, and emotional impact - very nice.

[Tasha]

i liked this a lot, you did a good job.

~ Ta'Shandra :)

[Lily Mae]

Interesting write..and putting your emotions into play.. xx