You know already

Some feelings are all hidden..taking that out needs some courage.. wanting to do the things you have never done before.. is something really tough :)

Words which I wanted to say 

I didn't say

I think you knew them already

Things which I wanted to show 

I didn't shown  them either

I think you felt them already

Dreams which I have seen

I didn't tell you

I think you knew them already

I have some hidden secrets

which I wanted to tell you

I think telling  you all this

makes you sad..

I try to tell you only truth

but somehow can't help myself

so told you a lie

I think you know these lies already

I am in a position 

where I know that you know 

all these feelings already

so I can't help myself 

on believing  you. .

 

Author's Note

please give honest reviews..give ratings also:)
read carefully before reviewing. . .

Reviews

[Dahlia Phoenix]

This is completely new. I love the way you use these pictures to formulate with the poem resulting in an outstanding art piece. Not all the time we need words but the simple sense of seeing what's happening also can be poetry itself. When it comes to loving someone, sometimes lies can be a temporary dose but in the end, they will discover the truth.

[TheMizFit]

Very beautiful. I love the format and everything. Very creative :)

[DarkAspen]

Amazing, no critisim at all.

[Jazique]

Nice its like a poet expresing itself in poetry itself. It was short and simple with an easy understanding of what is being said in effort of somebody wanting to say their words. I like what you did with the words as you had 'I think' in grey showing when that person has an opinion to know it is their's. Well done.

[Katseye]

Very interesting, don't think you can really grasp it in just one read.

[Dushyant Thadani]

I don't know how can I appreciate this work, because this work is so real, and so passionate... I am seeing love in a completely different way... Its true what you wrote in this poem, but the way you've written it is really good...

[Norma M Sutton]

I think you have summed it up very well. We all sensor or words to keep from hurting those we care about.

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

This was lyrical to me, repeatition of 'I think' some what made the piece choppy, but great job

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

We look deep into the eyes and we see that love shining back at us.

[Amy Bumpas]

That is what love is....one already knows....