You know already

Some feelings are all hidden..taking that out needs some courage.. wanting to do the things you have never done before.. is something really tough :)

Words which I wanted to say 

I didn't say

I think you knew them already

Things which I wanted to show 

I didn't shown  them either

I think you felt them already

Dreams which I have seen

I didn't tell you

I think you knew them already

I have some hidden secrets

which I wanted to tell you

I think telling  you all this

makes you sad..

I try to tell you only truth

but somehow can't help myself

so told you a lie

I think you know these lies already

I am in a position 

where I know that you know 

all these feelings already

so I can't help myself 

on believing  you. .

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Dahlia Phoenix]

This is completely new. I love the way you use these pictures to formulate with the poem resulting in an outstanding art piece. Not all the time we need words but the simple sense of seeing what's happening also can be poetry itself. When it comes to loving someone, sometimes lies can be a temporary dose but in the end, they will discover the truth.

[nibhz]

feelings well expressed! loved it!

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[Prritiy]

feelings have been given words nicely, liked it.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[Prritiy]

welcome :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

Twice I've read this and at the end I keep reading "believing IN you" for some reason that little stinker of a word just wants in your poem.. maybe it is because the protagonist needs to believe that he won't leave over the lies and secrets, that he will hang around and resolve the issues. This is a well composed poem and the repetition that you use works wonderfully in this piece. Well done!

[Akshat♥]

In this poem, i mean to say that...This girl knows everything about him that if he says something or not..she will caught it automatically...because of true love ;)
Thank you :)

[Ravyne Hawke]

ahh okay =)

[Patrick O'Neil]

Must agree, the us of pictures and poetry , really nicely done. and there is a deeper message also. Well written.

[Akshat♥]

Thank you...means a lot to me :)

[beautiful life]

nice

[Akshat♥]

Thank you dear :)

[smilempsn]

'You know already' that its something amazing , you wrote... and I liked it.. Nicely written.. ^-^

[Akshat♥]

Thank you :)

[smilempsn]

welcome :)

[Anuvart]

I got emotionally attached to this write of yours..
Thanks for sharing it..cheers!! :)

[Hitman]

Nicely written:)

[sudeshna]

nice work

[Nupur]

nice